Traveling with you

Self - explanatory

From dreams to dust, I

 

Have traveled a long, long way

 

With you in my thoughts.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dave "Doc" Rogers]

Thank you for submitting this to:
Well Crafted - July 2007


Cheers!
Doc.

[C. Harter Amos]

I didn't take this as a traditional "love" poem, but you must have loved this person a great deal to carry them with you emotionally for such a "long long way". I may be reading too much into it, but think you've left a lifetime of sad events and shoulders bent from the jouney between the written lines. "From dreams to dust" seems to say from innocence and hopefulness for a bright and good future to the time things fell apart and disintergrated to the point there was nothing left but dust. The question I couldn't answer was; was this person the one you'll turn away from, or now turn toward? Excellent write.

[Jack of Aces]

terrific...

[Nicole Renee]

Lovely! This has so much meaning in so little of words. :D Great job.

[Sean M. Addams]

your short poems have lot of meaning to them.. great job on this.

[John Stussy]

Few words that effectively captures the feeling. Great job.

[V. K. Harris]

A life time of love, very romantic.

[Ladysue]

This was excellent. You captured the feeling perfectly with just a few words.

[A.L. James]

A love poem in perfection. You should write for Hallmark!

[Jessica]

Very sweet and a little sad.. I love that it is so short. It's to the point and doesn't take away from the feeling of the poem like if you had written several stanzas. Perfection.