Hope to the END

Hope to the END

A Poem by Imperfection

 

 

Hope had entrapped my soul

My vision blurred,

I had braved ahead,

Kept moving until I was lifeless.

 

23rd June 2007

 

© 2008 Imperfection


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Aw, this is such a sad view of hope. It makes me really sad.

"entrapped" sounded kinda funny to me in that sentence. Like the grammar is fine, but I think you could've used a better word.

I think it's amazing how people can right such a short poem, and really create an effect on the reader.

Thanks for entering.

Posted 17 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Short and sweet.....Good write!

Posted 17 Years Ago


Such courage is enviable - there is great pain and the ending of lifelessness is heartbreaking. In spite of the courage all life was drained.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this brings the other side or the answer right to you... nice.. I do not tend to agree with using a different word, just use has entrapped present tense always sounds better but nice write..

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Aw, this is such a sad view of hope. It makes me really sad.

"entrapped" sounded kinda funny to me in that sentence. Like the grammar is fine, but I think you could've used a better word.

I think it's amazing how people can right such a short poem, and really create an effect on the reader.

Thanks for entering.

Posted 17 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

wow,that was a really cool read. keep up the great writes.

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 13, 2008
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