A call

Not any guiding verse , not even a prophecy
More like one on one talk with me
Or may be with god about life in jeopardy
Been with mystics, truth seekers, their philosophy.
Simple fact ,this soul not being me but somebody.
mirror on wall ,taught me to be with world's symphony
Hence , an abandoned coprse lying in disguised tragedy.
Marks on my heart,handful that walked over it
I let them , i never had my emotions on chastity.

Shaping up thoughts, the blank paper
Seems the mess like the stars or a scrabble.
often the guilt tripping seldom the conscious flipping.
A conflict , with a thought of life without whine
But everytime words precedes the interrogation signs.
Then a call to him , looking at the sky
Sometimes looking deep down inside.
Still every time I dip nib in the ink
It feels like the first time .

Reviews

[uNmAsKeD-dEluSiOns]

Wow I really like how this one flows and I could tell it was from deep down inside. This was really cool and the feeling really got me and so did every line- each one so beautiful and the kind of perfect that you just can't describe, you know? This is so inspiring. Great job

[Namrata]

A very true feeling captured with craft. It was a pleasant read , Amrit. I like your take on the connection you make of writing and soul and conversations with him ? It is profoundly beautiful and I must mention that I love the choice of words you make..

[Steve L.]

Very smooth flow...Well done!

[amrit]

thank you sir for reading it , thanks for appreciation :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

a beautifully written poem with apt choice of words, nice job, thanks for sharing

[amrit]

thanks to u indeed for reading :)

[Dipanjan Dutta]

words perfectly chosen to fit in the essence of the poem and the expressions in turn comes out naturally...

"Still every time I dip nib in the ink
It feels like the first time "...

Amazing lines...most probably a situation we auhtors come across often...

Look forward to read more of you

[amrit]

thanks for reading , im glad u enjoyed it :)

[Mayank]

amazing work, friend. There are lines so beautifully crafted... indeed, we are our own friend.

[amrit]

cant be happier if someone can relate it well .. thnaks for reading :)

[stars are far]

that was amazing, well done ;)
keep up he good work :D

[amrit]

thanks alot for reading and i glad u liked it

[Simran Kewlani]

This is amazing. I love it, Amrit.
You've got this weird connection with your words. They compliment one another very well. :)

[amrit]

thanks simran for reading ,for spending ur valuable time and for reviewing it.. :)

[Simran Kewlani]

My pleasure. :)

[R Smith]

I must agree with a previous comment, the last two lines are brilliant, the whole work makes me feel right at home, blank paper, guilt trip, conflict and so much more remind me how hard it can be sometimes to find that right moment, that theme or just first line that will launch me into another poem, thank you Amrit

[amrit]

yea , i feel u on this one sir. its a roller coaster for us . thanks alot for reading and for your valuable review.. :)

[Matching Socks]

We all look for and find inspiration in different places and sometimes it doesn't come easily but I just love your last lines so much. For me they ring so true.

[amrit]

thanks for reading Ana . im glad u could feel it .. :)