SAGA

Wounds cant be reckoned by everyone except some
Had a piece of heart like a leased one.
Remorse filled the other part,when all said and done
Twilight,now ego shedding,but cant get back that sun.
How often relations donot enter in this zone?
Infact love bind relationships,still heart feels alone
Butterflies once in stomach,long gone had flown.
Now ready to let go that ego ,to helpless to moan.

That time,it looses shine away when something is touched
Every single relation ends up the same way, the same crux
Abundant love to give, gasp while taking ,the nerves clutch.
A need to let go ego, a need to expunge.
Vicious circle, how long can one run this way?
When longings, desires pay back in dismay
A moment of reverence, other moment the heart is strayed.
Just a need to shed ego, a need for pride to sway.

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

Love it, very hard hitting and the flow definitely comes out with a bit of hip hip or rap influence.
Really great job.

[amrit]

thanks for reading ... im happy u liked it :)

[Namrata]

A nice use of words, but why do you call it a saga when all of it seems too redundant for you ? Did you fall for the stereotype ?

[amrit]

thanx a lot for ur words .. i named it saga because i think its a transition period from realizing the mess a soul is in to let go everything but a given moment ..`

[Namrata]

Wow, nice. :D