A little walk

By night i would walk down her street
With silence, a part of my odyssey.
Though always gasped for space
people around me know this about.
Only reason, with my relations i'm getting apart.
My soul wonders if i want to get into this again
make feel someone special at a whim
And find a path to trod alone,begin again.
Some hearts sob some curse to relieve that pain
My sins pile up everytime some eyes bring that rain.
Thousand thoughts, every single ending up alike.
Overwhelmed every footstep for her house
The air so warm still chilling down my spine.

Apprehensions not alone in this foray.
Seems, street lights know my pain
I see my shadow accompanying in that lane.
A moment it took me to comprehend
Because that shadow so bleak so estranged.
In front of her house, im standing with faith
Lavish house,she belongs to a different class.
Late night, surprised her fully lit up room
Her Man kissing, like he had her in a tainted glass.
My tears rolled untill they met my boaden lips
A faint smile, i whispered if i deserve this for my sins.

Reviews

[hardeep sabharwal]

a very nicely written piece,, I love the way you expressed,,
and your words are perfect

[amrit]

appreciate ur words .. thanks :)

[Matching Socks]

Beautifully written, how heartbreaking to see the object of your desire in someone else's arms.
Very nicely captured here.

[amrit]

it feels good when a reader feels the emotions woven with the writing .. thanks for reading and for ur words :)

[raj24]

i loved it Amrit.. a beautiful note.. seriously.. i have no words.. of all the poems on love or on breaks up here.. i simply loved this one... it walks slowly into your heart.. make you walk with the character.. its really like our punjabi songs.. you just made me sing it all ..loved it..:) thanks for sharing

Raj

[amrit]

aww man ! thanks alot, these words means a lot ... thanks for reading above all...

[A. Amos]

Enjoyable read my friend, jeaously was well depicted and smartly you accpeted your defeat as your sins. Well done!

[amrit]

thank you amos !