plight

plight

A Poem by amrit
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since i was away from home for a long time , i used to chat with a girl of my hood whom i feel for. just a description of a bit of story in poetic flow .

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keep the change, appreciation 
ain`t no need to wink.
Just pass the smile 
for the heart in the puddle ,
wanna sink.
Cant express, she way beyond 
if i tried , i be making fool of my own.
Her smile worthy to be clown.
Few words more expressions
cell phone pinged , a sweet temptation.
My reply , she bust a laughter
if i could see there after .


I SEE HER LESS I FEAR MORE 
SHE BOTHERS LESS, I BEAR MORE.
Those shades designer? 
They hiding stupid face , a clear moon.
She said to me `i talk seldom`
i have seen her ways ,
who talk to strangers 
roaming random making friends.
Its just a race
keep running if you are happy 
but i`l be still at this place.

© 2014 amrit


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I can see you hip hop come out in this haha- no but really it had nice rhythm to it, like a song. Good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


amrit

10 Years Ago

haha ! thanx for feeling the same way as i feel about this ! :)

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psychology tests say i struggle somewhere but with pen and paper everything falls int its place . hip hop is my love . by writing my thoughts break free.. feel free to send read requests , i`l read.. more..

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