BE THAT ONE

If someone could just hold me tight

numb all this pain

this semblance it`s been a while.

The burden of pain , way too much 

to conceal behind these silly smiles .

Like the nights be only answer of my life 

dark and gloomy, every moment out of sight.

Them memories haunting me out of blues

bit by bit i`m turning pale and white.

This dive be so deep so cold so scary

tonight i need one soul to help me breathe .

If someone could see my plight 

soak my tears, whispers in my ear 

`now i`m here its going to be fine`

If someone could be a serpent 

follow my sufferings with a dry eye.

Trail into this dark night of vehemence 

a fallen angel , be that aid from the sky.

Around the corner my bleeding heart 

just a touch of compassion , bejold that love 

hush the truth or coax the bluff .

Be that wishful , a shooting star

if someone could turn these wounds into these scars.

Reviews

[Moon]

You have done an awesome job of expressing your pain in this poem. I am sorry that you are having to go through such a harsh time. I hope that you do find someone who will care for you and show you love. But until you find that person, be strong.

[amrit]

thanks a ton for ur emotions , concern and love .. u liked it , that makes me glad .

[Moon]

No problem :)

[uNmAsKeD-dEluSiOns]

Well put, very good word choices and I could feel the power and emotion come through a long with the great flow- another great read. I like the imagery and your description makes me really feel and see it in my imagination.

[amrit]

wow thats so overwhelming ! thanks a lot .. still i want to write `he never was a king` type of poetry.. :)

[uNmAsKeD-dEluSiOns]

Your welcome and haha well I believe in you, every writer has there own great way of writing poems. I'm sure you already have a great one that I'd feel the same about ;)

[Steve L.]

I can feel the pain of this poem. Vivid descriptions. I can also relate to it. Well done.

[amrit]

thanks . im glad u liked it ... we all at some point go through this !