OBLIVION

As the moon crumbles into dust,
And falls beneath the valley of doom,
And as orphic weeds bloom,
Through the sun-dried pulp of dawn,
And as the Earth revolved around fire,
The archaic windows of the past,
Made room for sin,
And the universe vanished into blindness,
What was to remain was the silence,
And the words that,
Pierced through existence.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and strong words shared. Your statement solid, making the reader want to read and know more.
"The archaic windows of the past,
Made room for sin,
And the universe vanished into blindness"
The above lines. I liked and thank you Shweta for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[SSKaitlyn]

Beautifully written, with amazing flow, and now a new favorite of mine. Can't wait to see more of your work.
Well done.

[Shweta Sunil]

Thank you so much!Do review my other writing when you can :)

[SSKaitlyn]

I'll be sure to.

[sinNsincerity]

This is so awesome Shweta, thank you for sharing!

[Shweta Sunil]

Thank You! :)

[Awz]

I love this poem, it captures the emptiness I sometimes feel.

[Shweta Sunil]

Thank you so much,means a lot!