REDEEM

Oh!Redeem me with the truth
with the Dream,the passion
redeem my thoughts,with hope and beauty
hope for a better living
a better loving
a better wishing
a better thinking.
redeem me tonight
as your last thoughts are put to rest
and your breath sets to its own rhythm,
and you embrace the dreams in your head
redeem the love that once was faith
before my dreams lose to the last sleep.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Redemption is needed often in a life.
"a better loving
a better wishing
a better thinking.
redeem me tonight "
All of the above. Needed things in a long life. Thank you Shweta for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Jasbir Kaur]

Good poem . Carry on such work. You have potential.
May god redeem you with your dreams.
My best wishes.

[Shweta Sunil]

Thankyou :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

You are amazing!! I love this poem!!

[Shweta Sunil]

Thankyou so much :")

[Emily]

Lovely poem!
Great working!
Keep it up!!

[Shweta Sunil]

Thankyou Emily :)