LOVE?

So naïve, heinously cliché--
Just like them ol’ sweetheart movies,
That showed an affection,
That sufficed to pull through babbling stories.
Oh!What a mockery.
Two hearts,that meet and greet,
And poets that exploit emotion,
Write of some unseen 'beauty’-
Of yet another vain phenomenon,
You often call loving.
Writing foolish letters,
With words that were a result,
Of nothing but false emotion.
Too rough to accept,that
When loving was made
It was made for the fool.
And--
Alas!Yet you remain a fool.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to be foolish in the emotion of love.
"You often call loving.
Writing foolish letters,
With words that were a result,
Of nothing but false emotion. "
Any attempt at love. A good place to know. Thank you Shweta for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Shweta Sunil]

Thank You so much,Coyote! Means a lot!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[George Peck]

I like the poem even if I don't agree it's still wonderful to read good job thanks for sharing.

[Shweta Sunil]

Everyone is entitled to their own opinion :) Thank you so so much :)

[sinNsincerity]

I'll never turn down the task of being a woman's Jester. hehe
Nicely done Shweta.

[Shweta Sunil]

Thankyou :')