In 120 seconds i fall in love with cat

In 120 seconds i fall in love with cat

A Poem by amol patil
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This poem is about a boy and cat that how they fall in love with cat in only 120 second

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IN 120 SECONDS I FALL IN LOVE WITH CAT

             -AMOL PATIL

 

 

At hours of daylight,

 A cat sits in the van of my dwelling

 

Her voice “miau…miau…” seems to be greedy

And by listening my heart become panicky

 

I didn't have milk in my domicile so I give her a biscuit

But, she didn't eat it

 

Now, her greedy voice much louder than the prior

And my heart panicky also than the prior

 

Then I manipulate over her backbone by slowly

By looking at her lovely 

 

Suddenly, the greedy voice stops

And my heart becomes full of ecstasy

 

But, I can’t fritter more time with her

So I have to flee her

 

As soon as I go far from her, the greedy voices initiate

And again, my heart grows to be miserable

 

I don’t know what is going on, Her beautiful brownish eyes

Is repeated in front of my eyes

 

But a far I knew the reason and that was

“In 120 seconds I fall in love with cat”

© 2014 amol patil


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Sweet story! It's so hard to walk away when an animal simply wants your attention and nothing else.

Posted 9 Years Ago


amol patil

9 Years Ago

Thanks... Andronicus
Stan Lee

9 Years Ago

Welcome anytime!
Keep writing... I have enjoyed both your pieces! :)
I loved it Amol! I did and I found humour in it; it is clever and unique. I could really see and hear this cat and imagine myself. Thank you. Keep writing. Very good work. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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