Haiku

Haiku

A Poem by Ammar Younas

Cold and lonely nights
Your love is now choking me
I am dead inside

© 2018 Ammar Younas


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So many meanings inside this Haiku, makes me think of someone get abused by being strangled. Another is the cold of winter and it catching your throat outside.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Amazing. You said a lot in this. Second line, it must be choking.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ammar Younas

6 Years Ago

Thanks for correction
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Added on December 6, 2018
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Ammar Younas
Ammar Younas

Beijing, China



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Haiku Haiku

A Poem by Ammar Younas


Haiku Haiku

A Poem by Ammar Younas