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just some random thoughts

casting shadows on the wall, as dark  than life but not as small,

i can't read the writing from my place on the floor, face down and drowning, smothered and poor,

bitterness is romantic until it's all yours. There's got to be some way up from way down here,

but it's raining in my head, and the thunder is all i hear

Author's Note

This is a work in progess. it's a song my band is working on. I also write poems, working on a screenplay with a friend, and have the first 2 rough chapters of a novel. I have about 10,000 works in progress. Right now it's pretty generic but it'll get better.

Reviews

[poetic soul]

if its still in progress, i m sure the whole thing is gonna be f*****g rocking man! this is beautiful...... shadows on the wall......raining in the head... its jus WOW!!!

Good Luck and gr8 job man! m/

Regards,
Poetic Soul