One day...
A Chapter by
Ami N.
A six word story.
She
disappeared -
Never to return again.
© 2012 Ami N.
Author's Note
Read the title if you didn't get it initially.
Let me know what you think :)
Reviews
I'm not sure if I'm scared for her or happy for her.
Posted 8 Years Ago
There are many interpretations for this! That is part of what makes it so intriguing.
Posted 12 Years Ago
There are many interpretations for this! That is part of what makes it so intriguing.
You know, this one still works well without the title; to me the same was said. I loved how so much is said in only six words. Well done.
Posted 12 Years Ago
You know, this one still works well without the title; to me the same was said. I loved how so much is said in only six words. Well done.
Aw, sad. :( Haha, like the others said, it does have that weird, dark vibe!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Aw, sad. :( Haha, like the others said, it does have that weird, dark vibe!
Wow, just as Summer said: Ominous. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Wow, just as Summer said: Ominous. :)
Ominous.
Of course I automatically think of something supernatural or dark of the sorts. The picture does give off that vibe. With its grey hues and black shading...
I like it. I wish the sentences were a little bit more vibrant (other wordly, pun intended).
Nice.
*80*
Posted 12 Years Ago
Ominous.
Of course I automatically think of something supernatural or dark of the sorts. The picture does give off that vibe. With its grey hues and black shading...
I like it. I wish the sentences were a little bit more vibrant (other wordly, pun intended).
Nice.
*80*
To me, this story tells me that a girl left her boyfriend or husband... Great!
Posted 12 Years Ago
To me, this story tells me that a girl left her boyfriend or husband... Great!
Nice story! I think it means, that-
The girl died
Or
The girl disappeared because she didn't like the place she was living in and went somewhere else. She didn't return to her initial location again.
Keep writing!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Nice story! I think it means, that-
The girl died
Or
The girl disappeared because she didn't like the place she was living in and went somewhere else. She didn't return to her initial location again.
Keep writing!
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Added on May 2, 2012
Last Updated on May 2, 2012
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