~In A Raindrop~

Under the zoomed lens

A hidden world of creatures

In that single drop

Author's Note

I was thinking about my science class when I wrote this. Truly a wonder how so many creatures can survive in single drop of water.

Reviews

[Archia]

There can be so much in just one drop, so much of everything. It's all so true what you say in this haiku. Really nice to read.

[Forever Hidden]

Beautiful poem! Nicely written.

[Suditi]

A wonderful thought.
The picture is stunning. So is the haiku. And you're right, it is amazing to know that so many creatures can survive in a drop of water.
Keep writing :D

[Amata Luna]

Great, great, great. Love every bit and that droplet is just "gorgeous". How lovely nature can be really.

[Sahar moonlight]

Nice one, though when i first saw the picture, I found that the drop reflects image of white flowers what it could be surrounded with.
And i've related the Haiku to the imagine I've seen,
The way i've understood your Haiku is a clear view to a simple drop of dew can show the awesome world it reflects :)

After reading your note, i've realised it was a Science Haiku :D

[Nima M]

You really have a way with wwords. You can take three little sentences and give them a whole new meaning, a whole new life. *gives you the thumbs up*

[The XYZ Writer]

Complete science, in 12 words. Hehe, awesomeness by Amrah. :) But maybe.....you could change the words zoomed and lens?? It just seems somewhat out of place. :P But it could just be me.

*95*

[Starcaller]

The picture is amazing and your Haiku makes it even better. XD

Send me an RR when you have more haikus.

[Summer D.]

Eck. Biology. That was my first thought. I could do with or without it. Nice tie in to nature though. Very nice tie in...

The language wasn't that spectacular... but I still liked the tie in.

*90*

[AK]

Dude, do you realise how talented you are? These are the best Haikus I've ever read! Most of them are all just boring, plain and ununderstandable. I would have given you a million(or even more for that matter) but I guess the highest is 100
:D