~Rainbow~

A splash of color

       God's miracle awaited

              Painted in the sky~

Reviews

[Archia]

That was really beautiful, I love how the rainbow was described. What I actually really liked was the colours you used and how they were all blue (with a faint hint of purple perhaps). They weren't that array of rainbow colours. And I liked that because it made it gave it that subtle beauty.

[Suditi]

WOW.
The use of color, the style, the picture, the choice of words, the very essence of the poem is amazing.

[Amata Luna]

Great picture. Nice choice of words and imagery that is just amazing. Did I left anything more? ;)

[chance2]

very nice i liked it!

[Sahar moonlight]

WOW
This is really so nice.
The words, photo and colors chosen form an inspiring image.
This was a hit!

[Nima M]

That's awesome, Amrah. I could never ever write a Haiku. You did a wonderful job. The way you described the rainbow and all- Beautiful!

[Starcaller]

I love it! XD

[Summer D.]

Hehe, this is why I like writing haikus.
Beautiful pieces and a sure way to cheat to 100 pieces of writing by the end of the summer! (For me anyway).

Lovely feel to this haiku.
I'm all for traditional- black and white appearance (oh dull me) but this worked.
A splash of color.... painted in the sky.... I love these words. So descriptive. So artistic.

Splash and Painted really blend.
5-7-5. Seemed you kept to key.

*95*

[AK]

Wow! Amazing haiku!

[~Dragon X]

How pretty! *v*

I love the colors, the font, and the picture you included. All concocted into a fine cuisine ^^

...I'm insane. o3o

*100*