I Liked You.

"From the past."

At first I'm not interested
Then I found my self attracted
You're are real
But I can't feel

I took a leave
To feel relieve
I came back
You made me shock

You're happier
And I'm bitter
Thoughts were fighting
I should be celebrating

I don't know what to do
I don't want to be blue
Want you to like me
But it's not meant to be

I let it be
This feelings in me
I like you a lot
I liked you, dot

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

when you say but its not meant to be i let it be this feelings in me i like you a lot,i liked you, dot.
shows someone with maturity for your young age who has tried and it wasnt meant to be and has put a dot there to mark the end of trying. this shows real maturity leaving going forward and finding another hopefully in the future,thankyou for this poem and entry into my competition, good luck keep writing.

[amethyst1998]

Thank You!

[Levi Levin]

I think many of us have walked this road. Great job!!!

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

I like the way you open your heart, with words.