five minutes more

inspired by the song, among other things

I hear that song

and in my mind

I see your face ...

and I know instantly,

I never again 

want to be 

with anyone 

who doesn't 

make me crave

another 5 minutes

in their embrace.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Cassie]

You are such a good writer especially love poetry, you have a way with words. Kudos!!

[Lyn Anderson]

oh wow, pleased to make your acquaintance, 2 years later

[barleygirl]

You are the best at making a connection between a handful of relatable inputs & painting a fulsome tapestry of how this connection makes so much sense (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Lyn Anderson]

what a great comment

[Poetic Beauty]

Those moments of wanting linger a few more minutes in our lover’s embrace before having to face the real world

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for stopping in

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome

[Fran Marie]

Five minutes is all
it takes to know
that loving feeling
and craving for more

nicely penned

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for takung the time

[M.E.Lyle]

I had a bottle of beer like this once. I never wanted to put it down.
On a more serious note, finding that special someone is one of life's treasures.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for happening by

[Sami Khalil]

Simply stated with lovely intentions. Rhyming to music and feelings. I embrace your poetry.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you darling. A little note for my love on a cold and dreary day

[Sami Khalil]

Nothing like it. Keep them coming. You are welcome.

[Jade]

This is so wonderful and lovely

[Lyn Anderson]

Too kind. Thank you for the visit

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a nice little romantic poem. When you find someone who makes you feel like that always appreciate them.

[Lyn Anderson]

I have and I do. Thank you hon!

[Neville]

a little gem if ever there was....

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you my friend

[Neville]

always a pleasure... and always mine...

[redzone]

it's funny how that '5 more minutes' is so important, when the longing for them lasts so much longer when they are gone.... it's a very moving poem Lyn...

[Lyn Anderson]

Too kind my friend