beautiflu Lynn! i enjoyed the sensual romance that is pouring off of this poem ... makes me want to have the first kiss over and over .. really like the "i didn't fall, not at all, I just let you in" love the woman's power in that ..so sexy ... top notch ma'am
E.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thank you so much, my friend. When love is felt, it breathes between the lines, I think.
I loved them all
but the first one
I loved the most.
can you believe it I saw
a review on a older poem
from you from 4years ago
that I missed wow!
I've been busy with
family but I came to
show some love and
hope you're doing
Fantastic my friend.😁
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thanks, I appreciate the review. This is one of my faves of recent work
5 Years Ago
You're very welcome my friend
well then it's a precious jewel to
Be held. Take care �.. read moreYou're very welcome my friend
well then it's a precious jewel to
Be held. Take care 💛
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That song, its title, suggests that much more.. To feel wrapped in a place by finding self with a being who means everything, by dint of your words = could and should be indescribable. Yet, Lyn, you've set down your feelings so beautifully, i want to cry! Cry from envy, which, i know, is wrong to say but..
Re-read, re-felt.. thinking the three parts could be near spiritual,(by no means, intending to be sacriligeous but,.,, ) but, emotions as near to holy trinity as earth can give. Perhaps. Love is natural drama personified when voiced by you. 'In the dark,.... .after your goodnight,..... I dream,..... You.'
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Wow. I am truly honoured. Thank you. It feels spiritual because these little pieces flow from a very.. read moreWow. I am truly honoured. Thank you. It feels spiritual because these little pieces flow from a very special place. I am blessed
The formatting of this group of poems (it feels like three poems or chapters because of the distinctive switch in each) is visually striking. It adds a lot of interest and sort of reminds me of the Greek plays where the chorus would break in. I really enjoyed that aspect.
And the lightness and purity of your message. It is very like speaking to a cherished lover where so much of what is known between the two makes it unnecessary to say too much. There's an understanding. I like that. It feels very comforting, like a long hug. There is passion here, but also security. That makes a great combo for a love poem. I enjoyed this.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
So very kind, and so very right on all counts. These are three poems of the same theme, grouped toge.. read moreSo very kind, and so very right on all counts. These are three poems of the same theme, grouped together as one whole love poem.
Woah! Now here is a structure I have not yet encountered before, something very unique. The poetry feels like a journey itself. The words expressed are well thought out. The style has the reader not so much distracted but rather hooked on moving smoothly on from one piece to the next unable to halt in reading until they've come to the very end which is very simple in nature, but super sweet too. I am going to have to now explore more of your writing, as again I've discovered your form is very interesting.
Super well done Lyn Anderson.
~CarthageThorne
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Well thank you kindly. I have always written this way, and learned to embrace this style of mine her.. read moreWell thank you kindly. I have always written this way, and learned to embrace this style of mine here at the cafe'. You'll find them sprinkled throughout my 2000 or so works posted here. Each book of poetry is made up of 30 to 50 works of similar subject matter, some books still in progress.
I write under a pseudonym.
I don't do Read Requests, but you can PM me if you want me to read something specific. I make friends with people who I read and interact with. I won't accept random reque.. more..