inside your ache

inside your ache

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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a thought or two inside of me

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I want to bury myself
inside your ache
and snuggle up next to
each and every pain ...

I want to kiss away those little lines
that settle between your brows
and smoothe out the edges
at the corners of your should be smile ...

I want to give you all of me
and take away the things 
that hurt you
if only for awhile ...


© 2018 Lyn Anderson


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this shows such selfless love...so intensely.
It's really NOT about what we get back is it?
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

You are so right.
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Gee
That's what we would do for the ones we love.
When our daughter was a child I would have given anything to be able to take even her minor ailments away from her.
Hi Lyn, hope you are well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Yes. That kind of love
Deep love in every line of this one, Lyn. When you love someone, you care about their comfort and peace as much as, if not more than, your own. You want to make them happy. So sweet and loving. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Thank you dear Lydia
positive sentiments Lyn! a very vulnerable position tho. when loved ones hurt inside it is not an easy thing to discern what they need ... we come up with overused and trite sayings of condolence and alleged encouragement ...many times, says i, what is needed is to sit quietly with our friend ...to try to be with their pain inside as you say ... tho your poem is a lovers longing it has broader applications ... the repetition of "I want...." makes it somewhat about your speaker and not the one hurting .... but "inside your ache" expresses a beautiful humanity in the desire to be connected ... and to take away the pain of another ..not your strongest work, Lyn ... but beautiful in sentiment none-the-less ;)
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time.
Thats love..... :)
You feel their pain and you want to take it all away and just wish them happiness in whatever way you can isn't it...

Lovely poem....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review
Beautiful words Lyn, that show how one persons pain filters through to others who love and care. It can gnaw away at others to see someone in pain, and the inability to help only makes it more acute. If only more felt this way.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Thank you for understanding
Soft, honest and wonderful words share. Tender words and kindness is needed by the all of us. Thank you Lyn for sharing the amazing poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

You are too kind
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

I love your work. I am off to work soon. I will return and more in the morning. I hope you are doing.. read more
Splendid altruistic sentiments. We all need such words spoken to us, if only occasionally.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Thank you. That's what I was hoping for
A love poem, that speaks loudly to me. To feel that way about someone is special.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Thank you. It is.

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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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