Gosh, Lyn!
Lovely flowers, and what's not to adore about a "real" love poem, one about giving of one's caring heart to another unselfishly, without expectations in return … only that they let you.
"I want to give you all of me" … goodness!
And, what a smooth write with perfect line-breaks and tender imagery to touch the heart of the most hardened amongst us … whom with warm blood could help but adore you.
You just keep getting better … smiles 'n hugs! ⁓ Richard : )
Psst!
Check last word "a while" (ie: we'll be there in a while [soon]), as apposed to "awhile" for a short time.
Awwwww. Right now I have those anime heart eyes. This is so cute and has melted my heart of stone. This is how I feel about this one person... They have all these pains and stuff and are so sad and convinced their life sucks. I really just want to admit I love them and I'm here for them but I can't..... So I just shut my mouth and say I'm their friend. Sigh. This is really beautiful and makes me smile because of how it applies so well to my life
This is one of the most affectionate & endearing messages I've seen from you. I have to admit, sometimes I wish I'd known someone in my life who felt this way about me. It's the ultimate expression of caring (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
'should be smile' - I like that. Like someone intent on smiling but something or the other keeps them from it...
This piece shows such devotion. Some people are special just like that, that we want to do anything for them.
Heart touching write.
These words are so good & as I see it, so very necessary to get off your chest, like a tepid sponging for a loved one with a raging fever... still got my fingers crossed..
I like it, but it does sound like the audition essay for "Wife of the Year." If so, you get the tiara, the sash, the convertible and the all -expense paid cruise.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
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