the prince of Dark

visit http://www.writerscafe.org/Caradoc

he comes to me
in the dark and
whispers sweet
tender kisses
poison words
that  slide  in
soothing deep
reveal hidden
treasures --
his poetry
is a knife
to your
heart.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

A lovely tribute... The poem contains the beauty of darkness and how he uses it with a masterly presentation... I will look at his/her works...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Lyn Anderson]

Glad to hear it. If you like stories, he has some very good ones as well. There are writers here who are over looked for one reason or another. Funny, I am perceived as popular, yet some of my works have less than 30 views. I don't concern myself with such things for me, but for others I like to help when I can in my small way to highlight there very excellent work.

[Inject Positivity]

I will go at his page soon today... I agree with you... I try to reach to the pages which are mostly neglected... Thank you for attaching the link to his page..

[Caradoc]

I am both flattered and extremely honored. You make me sound much more impressive than I am. This, Prince of Dark, fellow sounds like a snake actually. lol Tender kisses and poison words? Sliding in deep, a knife to your heart? This piece is dark indeed, sinister even.

I approve.

-Cara

[Lyn Anderson]

I wanted to draw attention to your special brand of dark. I hope people take notice.

[Caradoc]

Well thank you. A couple have. But I don't expect much. I think the closest I ever got to being read a lot was when I was number one on the list of top reviewers....like 4 years ago.

[Caradoc]

P.S. I love this song.

[Lyn Anderson]

So glad you like it. :) MWAH! What matters is what quality of reviews you have. Some of my best has less than 100 views but more than 20 reviews. To me, the interaction is what matters. :)

[Caradoc]

True. The interaction is what matters. Edit: Kinda miffed that the Cafe still doesn't let you edit replies.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my goodness ... so much in this short poem ..i like it a lot .. the temptations and warning are so well placed ... powerful in my opinion ... and the secret part of me wants some :O
;)
E.
ps. i read below that this is about one of the poets on WC ..i do not know him ...but will keep my eye out for his "stuff"

[Lyn Anderson]

Visit his page. His link is in my comments. He is a very good, but, in my opinion, very under-appreciated poet here.

[Einstein Noodle]

boy are you ever up early!! yes i noticed that as i was waiting on my computer and am going there presently ... i think this poem of yours is very good ..its got edge

[Lyn Anderson]

the dog bounces me out of bed between 5 and 530 am -- the regular time to get up during the school year. He doesn't know there is no school.:)

[Einstein Noodle]

yeh! gotta love the dog ... our Bella is acutely tuned to my arising and 'bout trips me getting to the feed bin ...no matter what time it is ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, he writes dark...and he does it so well...

j.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, and one of the really under-read and under-appreciated poets on this site.

[Jon Roggie]

You have to keep adding names to the list?

[Lyn Anderson]

The list of poets I adore? You are way up there, hon.:)

[Jon Roggie]

I was actually talking about a reading list, but I will take the compliment. ;)

[Papaya]

Very nice tribute. I did read him. I like his style.
Nice form here, looks like the tip of a pen.

[Lyn Anderson]

That was the idea, or the blade of a knife. I just noticed he had 4 unreviewed or under reviewed poems up.

[Papaya]

So many great writers go unnoticed...

[Lyn Anderson]

That is very true.