him to you

a poem inspired by a review from redzone

A sea change
inside me
pushed back
the established
tide --

My mind turned
a corner,
and I knew
we were
through ...

When he became you
and you became him

Author's Note

At some point, the old love becomes the irrelevant him,
and the new love becomes the you

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Uncertainty and the beauty of love, when one person rejects it simply means we are going to become the world to someone else... A thought provoking write with a wise view...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for your kindness.:)

[Pryde Foltz]

You have captured an odd phenomenon of the mind. Energies shift and can inhabit where they did not before. Wonderful write:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much Pryde.

[barleygirl]

I remember a long while back thinking of the "next" relationship like a balance scale . . . little by little, the new situation is collecting experiences & memories that finally outweigh the pile of junk that came before. That's what your poem reminds me of. I know exactly what you're talking about here.

[Lyn Anderson]

What a perfect way of describing it, thank you.

[Papaya]

to use a Chess analogy
one man's pawn may be another man's Queen

you are a Queen

[Lyn Anderson]

Weird how sometimes on this site, reviews are not tagged for you to know they are there. Thanks! MWAH!

[Papaya]

:)
Mwah back at ya.

[redzone]

and the "new love" is usually so much better too... or at least it can be... so the posse helped then.. cool.. ;0) remember we are at stand by...

enjoyed how you made "him" into "you"... and hopefully you are having fun too!!!

redzone

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks darlin! Mwah!

[V]

Interestingly written. Short and simple but precise with a nice topic.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, I appreciate that.

[V]

You're welcome.