A cheesy romance poem

a collaboration between Ana Sophia and KL Goode

Here is a story of two ladies
who like their cheese --
but better be ware which one
can you please ...

first there is
Ana, all dreamy
and sweet ...

I like mine velvety and smooth
With a spreadable charm that's thick
Served with some wine, to warm me inside
And make my heart beat (boom boom)
Like a mild romantic cream,
From a Marechal that's nutty and sweet

Or maybe you prefer
something real Goode --
is always a treat...

I like my cheese with a little bite,

No need to butter me up with something creamy,

Something with a nice sharp edge will do,

Aged in brine, better with time --

When it comes to cheese --

Serve it to me sans romance please,

I like it blue.

Author's Note

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

Chuckles...gosh you two are so so clever, this is as delicious as the subject matter! I love me some cheesy romance. Very nicely done. R x

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks hon, Ana and I have a certain rapport. :)

[Papaya]

I just saw this on the wire. :)
Thanks from me too Rach!

[David Scott]

I think I'm going to open a bottle of cab now. Ha. A delicious read. Yes, very "cheesy". Silly cat.

[Lyn Anderson]

And silly Ana, don't forget -- I couldn't have done it without her smooth additions ...

[Matching Socks]

Thank you from me too!

[V]

Haha, what a nice and entertaining way to put it. Amusing and a tad provocative, even. I have to admit I like it your way, with the "little bite". The last two lines read perfectly to me. Really good ending.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. I find collabs challenging but fun.

[V]

You're welcome. Collaborations are really challenging, I think, because one has to adapt to the thoughts of another person and trying to matcg them with one's own.

[Matching Socks]

KL Goode makes it easy Vanessa! :)

[??????]

YOU BOTH DID AWESOME TOGETHER:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. We have fun writing together.

[??????]

That's great you both welcome:)

[Matching Socks]

Thanks UK! Lady Goode is an amazing poetess and person.

[??????]

Your welcome yes she is good people:) We go back don't we KL

[Jon Roggie]

Killing me with this one. Nice one. Of course that goes out to both of you.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. I appreciate that, and I am sure Ana will too. She is a very fun collaborator, and we both like to whip it up quick. :)

[Matching Socks]

I do appreciate it very much Jon! :). Thank you. KL makes these fun!

[redzone]

Gouda and milder chesses I think... also there is a wine and cheese mixture that is softer and spreadable I like... mozzarella melted on a ham sandwich and parmesan grated on a salad or on pasta... These are my favorites... i know kinda boring...

you two collab well and have complimentary if very different cheese tastes...

redzone

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much. I enjoy a good collaboration with Ana, who is talented, and genuinely nice.

[Matching Socks]

Thanks red. I like mozzarella too. But smothered over pizza.
Double cheese and pepperoni. Mmmmm. :)

[redzone]

PIZZA!!!!! come on KL there is PIZZA!!! and no BLUE CHEESE allowed!!!! ;0) PEPPERONI!!!! DOUBLR CHEESE!!! first it's ear worms and Canadian music, now it's PIZZA, Ana..... ;0)

[Lyn Anderson]

Umm, I like Feta on my pizza.

[Matching Socks]

I like feta on anything. Scrambled eggs with feta. Mmmm.

[redzone]

How could i have forgotten Feta... thanks KL... yes, on everything..

[Matching Socks]

So much fun writing a little light and cheesy poem with you.
I like the song choice. Bread and butter goes nice with cheese. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Always a pleasure -- LastMonth is looking for you -- I recommended you as a source for great fairy tale rhyme stories. (see review below)

[Matching Socks]

Ah, yes, he just found me. :)
Thank you for recommending me.

[LastMonth]

Great poem.
Enticing as always -

Quick question though.
I've been looking for Ana S.'s profile ever since you recommended I read her-
And I couldn't find her WriterCafe's Profile.

Any help would be welcome!

[Lyn Anderson]

Ana Sophia. She will be popping on here and I am sure she will read this and contact you (he's cool Ana:) -- he likes rhyme stories.

[LastMonth]

Awesome!
Thanks for the directions Goode.
Heading to work now, but if I have a weak day at the bar, I might sneak a look in her stories at work. (Don't rat me out though.)

[Matching Socks]

Thanks LM, for ready this little bit of cheesy poetry. :)

[Matching Socks]

*reading. Oops to the typo.

[LastMonth]

All good! Lots of people wanna get drunk today. So no time to review you properly until I get home

[Neville]

My word! I think this may be a tad rude for me, in a cheesy kind of way... Give me a nice strong Cheddar or a Stilton any day although a Camembert or a Brie will do at a push....Nice

[Lyn Anderson]

Ha ha. We had fun writing it. Ana is a sweetie, always loving that gooey stuff.:)

[Lyn Anderson]

ps, you got the rough cut, Ana has sent me a little gentler version ...:)

[Matching Socks]

Hi Neville, I'll throw my thank you in as well. :-)

[Neville]

My pleasure entirely Ana..............N