take back the day

take back the day

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

there are some days you would seize

"
take it back

seize the day
and throw it out
the window --
I am sorry
I told you
anything.
I am sorry
I told you
nothing.
again
.

turn the page


We are

Separate pages

Of  two very

different books ...

bound by

our mutual disbelief

in

 happy endings



nothing to you

I am not just someone

Am I?

Still?

After all of this time?

Who am I kidding?

I am nothing

If I am just someone

To you.





© 2018 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
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good song choice you rocker you ;) the pointed barbs of your first verse are a power punch start .. and i am also surprised at the twist on "seize the day" ..good stuff my friend ... its a rough ride to realize a vested relationship is over ...and the anger turned inward in your closing is the worse thing to do ..but we do it all the time ... i am an optimist so i beg "the rest of the story" as she heals and is stronger than ever ..but thats just me ;) well done .. strongly emotive and universal/personal with straight speak .. i like it!
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much. This is one of those remains to be seen still in progress kind of things. The o.. read more
Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

:) ....................
Honest, strong and good thoughts my dear friend. I like the way you twisted the language to make your point. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

So nice to see you. Thank you.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I'm here. Just working too hard and you are welcome.

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Added on April 28, 2016
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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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