our time together is sometimes rushed but never divided the world slides into another slot, everyday hides, ditching reality's plot - feel me under after surrender roll over and sleep; peace I find in my restless mind with you lying next to me.
those three words
catch you later we'll see ya see you soon I hope so You know so ... how many words come in threes? we are good at making sure the only three we never say in certain order stay that way.
inferred emotion
I love you is inferred in everything you do. don't say it I won't believe you.
I really liked this:) I was reading the first and got to the three letter words part and really caught me. Yeah I guess in my own life the 3 words I love you don't mean jack from a great many. When one has seen hurt many times you just get to the point of I DONT TRUST! Awesome read my dear friend:)
"the world slides into another slot,everyday hides", when a person can help you escape to a better place, that person is a keeper. Ah, those three little words that go unspoken because they hold so much weight. I loved that middle poem....three words to a line. Indeed, as the song says, "more than words".....the words are nice, but the actions say so much more. These are three of your best, KL. Loved them. Lydi**
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
aww, that means so much -- I believe when we allow ourselves to feel the words we write, the emotion.. read moreaww, that means so much -- I believe when we allow ourselves to feel the words we write, the emotion reaches people on the other side of the page. I am glad this accomplishes this.
Yeah, I understand this. Actions speak louder than words of course, but once you get over that fear, those three words are nice to hear.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
That chapter has yet to be written. As for the words, who knows -- my one friend thinks "we'll see y.. read moreThat chapter has yet to be written. As for the words, who knows -- my one friend thinks "we'll see ya" will be on my third wedding cake. :)
I like the contrasts in each of your poems. Words are just words unless there is true sentiment beneath them, and sometimes the redundancy of our daily discourse are simply platitudes we have been conditioned to use. Where has the art of speaking in full imagery gone? Of course some actions need no words at all. I admire your ability to string ideas together in separate pieces that fit so well, and tell their stories separately yet collectively.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Always a pleasure to have you stop by, and read your thoughtful reviews. Thank you.
For some reason, the word I hear is "goodbye". Moving write.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
My friend, your perceptive ear runs deep -- while this poem is thankfully not a goodbye, I have ofte.. read moreMy friend, your perceptive ear runs deep -- while this poem is thankfully not a goodbye, I have often felt that is the only time either of us would say it. Strange, perhaps, but that's just the way this one has played out.
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