I smell you

they have a certain odour ...

I smell you
swimming
right out
of the toilet --
I didn't realize
the water
flowed up
instead
of down,
once again,
a river rat's
about town.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

boy did you fool me! i read the title and was prepared for something far different ... smells are so vivid ..and this one to a "T"
time for the exterminator eh!?
:)
E.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, well this one has been deleted and blocked in two separate personas between the last couple days. The lengths they go to astound me (I say they, because hey, anyone who is willing to create multi ids to harass people is a they.:)

[Einstein Noodle]

ahh! he's back again >:/ thank you for the warning! love to you KL ..report report report and block .. one would think the sewer the rat lives in would soon fill and explode his ruddy guts ..
love you girl :) don't let the poison meant for him affect you .. it is a glorious day!
E.

[Caradoc]

The Kill Bill series recommends using only the best Hatori Hanzo steel when exterminating large infestations of rats.

-Cara

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes that may just be a solution.

[Lyn Anderson]

The sheer effort and energy it takes for some people to create multiple identities in order to harass and make fun of people's naivete', and be rude about their writing, is mind boggling to me. I regret that I have to take the time of deleting, blocking and dodging. But so be it, better than entertaining their drivel.

[Pryde Foltz]

haha ... yes like that poop that just won't flush ... the biggest splash, the biggest stink, and nothing but indigestible refuse. By advise ... time and water dissolves all ... even river rats. Hope you are laughing. Pryde

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks Pryde, yes, not exactly a masterpiece, this poem, but some things have to be flushed - more than once.

[Pryde Foltz]

The poem is very funny ... I speak of the returning t**d:)

[Lyn Anderson]

amazing how stubborn the things can be

[jacob erin-cilberto]

quite a good metaphor here....yes, they have that distinct odor...

[Lyn Anderson]

Luckily I have learned. thanks for popping in.

[Matching Socks]

I really like the way your tags rhyme. :)
Oh well, I'm reaching that don't give a damn stage.

[Lyn Anderson]

My radar is on high alert for trolls, when I find them, I delete them, so I can pretend they aren't there. Taking them on is what they want.

[Zugzwang]

Right on! Some people are nasty pieces of work.
Flag, block, delete as a wise person once said.

[Lyn Anderson]

Swimming upstream and stirring up trouble for our friends. I hate being right sometimes.

[Zugzwang]

Give 'em a piece of your mind, I say. Huzzah!