Smile me

for my Irish

Smile me ...
your
Irish
eyes
crystal
blue
light
up the
lines
in your
honest
face
open
to your
honest
heart
inside
your
Irish
smile.

Author's Note

Sappy, this is true. I admit it.

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

The eyes have a way of letting one know whats going on in the heart- just wonderfully written- 🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this poem. the words danced to perfection. Thank you Lyn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh yes, I do love this one. My Irish is a treasure.

[Coyote Poetry]

Irish eyes are shining, the song are being sang and the Irish whiskey bottles are a-many. The Irish smile is alive when the night is long and the music is good.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This reminded me of that song 'Ocean Eyes' by Billie Eilish. Some eyes and smiles say it all. ;)
Lovely piece.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much. It remains one of my all time favourites, because it always makes me smile.

[Lydia Shutter]

Because of your well written words, I can picture him.....and I am taken in by his blue eyes and smile. So lovely. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much for stopping by one of my favourite "not-poetry" one line poems ...

[Neville]

Although I'm English through and through, I understand precisely where you are coming from.. ya can't beat blue eyes and an honest face now can ya....... Neville

[Lyn Anderson]

No, you can't. :)thanks for reading this one. It made me smile

[Neville]

me too................

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh yes, the one liners! Our commiserations. How some people despise the one liners and call it not-poetry! Lol. I almost forgot. I met you between the lines ...:) ohhhh, that sounds like a poem to me, race ya ...:)

[Neville]

I dont stand a chance, I do remember tho....

[Lyn Anderson]

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/amendoim1988/2044036/

[Neville]

You are one cool Cat................N

[Bacchus]

I have a hot Irishman- with those amazing blues.

[Lyn Anderson]

Interesting. Hopefully you live far away from me and it's not the same one.:)

[Bacchus]

Oh, I'm laughing out loud!

[Lyn Anderson]

oh thank God, some people seriously lack a sense of humour in this place.

[Bacchus]

I tried to capture the longest we were away from each other in my poem yellow- check it out. :)

[V]

I love the structure, like one words leads you to the other, almost like into another, like it all melts together to one lovely and splendid. And the combination with the smile makes me think of someone kind and beautiful. Thanks for the nice reminder. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

You are welcome, and the subject most definitely is kind and beautiful.

[V]

Yes, it is :) Argh I forgot a word again. Stupid cell...: lovely and splendid piece, I meant to write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like that honest irish streak...and the eyes usually will give that away...

honest eyes, honesty heart...

[Lyn Anderson]

A friend of mine saw a picture of him with me -- he said, "he smiles into his eyes, that's a good thing." And yes, it is.:)

[highonwords]

this blew me away - like a gentle breeze - like sunlight peeking through the clouds - rolling grass and blue mountains shadowing a kind, honest heart and that humble grin

steph

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww thank you. That is the effect I was going for.

[highonwords]

you're welcome, kl

steph

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I like how you serenade us even in the green representation of the Irish. A wonderful take....:)))))

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for stopping in -- it's easy, since my muse is Irish.:)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome. ...:)())