push pull and polar opposites
A Chapter by
Lyn Anderson
can't ever leave it in that calm collection
Surprise something you never felt before someone(s) who wanted HER more funny how such a little thing can put a kink in your swing be careful what you wish for there's two sides to that open door.theory of relativity he is relatively romantic when he enters her for me but nothing is relative about the way he gives his heart to me
who are you? assumptive premises swim in your sea of lies who are you to judge the me inside his eyes?
full circle on the other side Working so hard at containment. erecting barriers around our secret parts suppressing words uninterpretable to our weary hearts opening the door to something more ...
© 2018 Lyn Anderson
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Nothing makes the heart grow fonder than to see someone else desires the one you are with. The first snippet is my favorite.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks so much, and I agree, on all counts.
Oh, yes, there are two sides and those who refuse to see the side on the other side of the door are in for a rude awakening! Even in the midst of romance, one has to be wary...it's a shame really, but it is the truth. I so enjoy your words. Lydi**
Posted 9 Years Ago
Oh, yes, there are two sides and those who refuse to see the side on the other side of the door are in for a rude awakening! Even in the midst of romance, one has to be wary...it's a shame really, but it is the truth. I so enjoy your words. Lydi**
9 Years Ago
Ah, thank you. I post a sappy one and then feel I have to balance it out.:)
yes, lots of walls, disinterest, after enough pain, love can be a cat and mouse game....
Posted 9 Years Ago
yes, lots of walls, disinterest, after enough pain, love can be a cat and mouse game....
9 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping in. I know I have been gone a lot.
"containment", "walls", why do we live in a world where we are constantly on the defensive and self preservation, our hearts closed so as not to suffer abuse, pain, disappointments... I like how you express this "push/pull" and polar opposite KL.... Don't think there is a "relative" love just the male patriarchal right to screw over women in as many ways as possible... anyway you always find the artistic ways of expressing this... good to read you again KL
Posted 9 Years Ago
"containment", "walls", why do we live in a world where we are constantly on the defensive and self preservation, our hearts closed so as not to suffer abuse, pain, disappointments... I like how you express this "push/pull" and polar opposite KL.... Don't think there is a "relative" love just the male patriarchal right to screw over women in as many ways as possible... anyway you always find the artistic ways of expressing this... good to read you again KL
9 Years Ago
Thank you hon, I appreciate your insight. :)
full circle, and can we open those doors?
I hope to reach this level.
Posted 9 Years Ago
full circle, and can we open those doors?
I hope to reach this level.
9 Years Ago
More words than I would expect my friend, thank you.
"theory of relativity
he is relatively romantic
when he enters her
for me
but nothing is relative
about the way he gives his heart
to me"
Your writes are surpassing relativity and gaining the speed of light and wisdom. You are creative...:)........
Posted 9 Years Ago
"theory of relativity
he is relatively romantic
when he enters her
for me
but nothing is relative
about the way he gives his heart
to me"
Your writes are surpassing relativity and gaining the speed of light and wisdom. You are creative...:)........
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much. I haven't been around much. Trying to catch up.
9 Years Ago
Yep. You are welcome...:).......
All good work, but of the four I liked the chastity device poem the best.
Posted 9 Years Ago
All good work, but of the four I liked the chastity device poem the best.
9 Years Ago
How clever, thank you.
Another collection of striking writes with such blatant emotions in them all. Who are you is my favourite.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Another collection of striking writes with such blatant emotions in them all. Who are you is my favourite.
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much. I shall have to catch up on my reading while putting off my taxes once more.
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