singed wings and cartrophen kisses

on thoughts from Ana Sophia's love songs

she describes it
as hard wired
for love --
a moth
to a flame;
her wings are
singed
but she can't
help it
she is at it again
she'll only need
a shot of
cartrophen
or two
to kiss away
the pain.

Author's Note

Read Ana Sophia's poem hardwired
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AnaD/1445656/
Cartrophen is a Veterinary pain reliever

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sometimes there is good in being bad, it can be very liberating when we feel like life is suffocating us.

[Lyn Anderson]

I think there is just no way around it. Some of us will go for love even when it burns us.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good music and amazing poetry. The first time I heard the group. I like the energy and the drive of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry and music.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

Really? Well, it is a good song, and thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I love music. Give me reason to write.

[Matching Socks]

Haha!!! Awesome, I love this.
Ok, now I get why Mark reviewed my poem with a HELLYEAH!
Love the poem!

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh, cool, glad you got it. Here I am, merrily plugging your writing -- I was wondering when you might pop in.

[Matching Socks]

I'm doing the rounds! :)
That's awesome, I was wondering why I had a few new faces pop over!
You rock babe! xo

[Lyn Anderson]

Eden was inspired by you too.:)

[Matching Socks]

I just read that one too! :)

[Delmar Cooper]

If love is a leading cause of arthritis I must be Casanova.

[Lyn Anderson]

Well, that may very well be true.:)

[Rene Salinas]

Tried it and all ! Yeah! but if I may answer from a personal point of view and respectfully yours would be "Are you out of your mind?" If somone did 10% of what some of you have gone I would love sollitude anf lonelyness more than I already do. In fact you ladies are advocating for celibacy and monastic life. Yet you are it again?

Baffles me but then again you guys are from Venus right? I'm still stuck in the neverending..

Thankyou

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah, it is a little much, sometimes.

[Rene Salinas]

One thing is to love the players another to love the Game...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

It is wonderful to draw inspiration from others. This is indeed inspired and as always you take a subject and turn it into a garden of expression.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much.

[NeiL ArandA]

To a moth who is attracted to flame even it meant great pain and losing its only way of transportation .oh yes death too is mind buggling . I wonder if human can be like that too . Love perhaps or vices . I know animals learn from painful experience to avoid such encounter in the future if they manage to escape . That's how they survive . But the moth is really different . Its like it never learned and keeps committing the same mistakes again . I hope they put a glass outside the fire so the moth wings won't get burned .
Enjoyed the thought of this piece KLG .

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, and it came from Ana's thought, that we must love at all costs.

[NeiL ArandA]

That is brilliantly beautiful . To love at all cost . Its probably why love always win . Love also keeps no records of wrong . To truly love someone will cost us something . But Ilike the way you said it . Love is sacrificial .Someone said that Love is blind . It sees but it doesn't mind .

[Sami Khalil]

"to a flame;
her wings are
singed
but she can't
help it"

Beautiful and sad KL...Nothing like kissing that pain away and start anew...Excellent...:).......................

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, it was an inspiration from Ana.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...Good for Anna...:).......................