senryus in the snowdrift

in the banks

brushing off the flakes
cold and wet they leave a stain
like you it won't last

The crystals stacked high
One by one they form a drift
Inside thoughts of you

Stuck in a snow bank

bones beneath the fluffy white

There now until spring

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

All three were beautiful. I'm waiting for Winter. Your description will come true soon in Michigan. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry dear friend.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

We had a storm. It's all melted, but it will be back.

[Coyote Poetry]

I know. I'm across the lake from you. It is gone here too. It will be back.

[Rene Salinas]

This is the cold that warms through transformation as this cold unites it brings togetherness and invites to understand that we are all in the same boat.

Way to transform the nature of cold

Thankyou

[Lyn Anderson]

Kinda gotta. It's a long winter ahead.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

these are about the snow...but somehow make me feel a little warmer tonight...
thanks for that ...

[Lyn Anderson]

I am glad for that, and for your reading my work.

[Delmar Cooper]

Short and pithy works for me.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you as always.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh I hate you for bringing the snow to me already lol! Three very different senyru on the same subject and all that express it so well.

[Lyn Anderson]

We got an unexpected dump. Never had snow this early since I moved here 1999. Next week supposed to be spring like. Who knows?

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow, very good my friend… they all have great metaphoric analogies. I really love the first one.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you I appreciate it. You do this all the time, I thought I would give it a whirl.:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well you gave it one hell of a whirl my friend.