kissing frogs in lieu of common sense

kissing frogs in lieu of common sense

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

I don't know where this one is going, it just sounded right

"

She's tired of ...

kissing frogs in lieu of common sense;
her lips are parched and dry,

each one holds his own consequence,
there's not enough balm to apply

maybe time to call it a day
and curl up with the cat,

there's safer ways a girl can play
men simply aren't all that
.



© 2016 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
an 8/6 rhyme scheme.

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I have definitely been there! You describe the feelings well, using relatable imagery. Nowadays, I like my frogs croaking & splashing in my front porch doggie water bowl! *wink! wink!*

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much for visiting these older pieces.:)
No, we certainly isn't. To be truthful, I'm just amazed we've been put up with for so long. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

thanks for dropping in to this one. Yes, well, I was in a mood at the time. Mostly I like men (for n.. read more
This is funny, made me larf!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

That, of course, was the intention.:)
Very funny and the song is simply sublimely ironic.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks for noticing that. I do appreciate all the reviews.
ok.. now I am giggling!... LOVE this one!!!.. the playful punch tickles in all the right places.. love the phrasing.. yep.. favorites.. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks, April, for all the reviews.
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

it is always my pleasure.. you know I like to rack them up and enjoy the ride..
Agreed, at times contorting into your own is a way of re - connecting. In my case a therapeautic one as recharging is very much needed in order to continue the path.


Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thank you, as always, Rene, for your ever thoughtful reviews.
Gotta love the soft kittens. So much less complicated than a difficult man. This one actually made me chuckle! Nice writing, KLG!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Glad to be of service.:)
Rather have the cats..those toads can create a big mess in your life

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Yeah I am digging my cat at the moment. Thanks for popping in.
The dating pool is certainly full of slimy things that can give you warts on your heart.

A great play on words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by as always.:)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

As always my pleasure :)
Sometimes, you think you're kissing a frog and then it turns out to be a toad.
Everyone knows toads can give you warts if you're not careful, so yeah....
Definitely be safe about the love and make sure you know exactly who you're kissing. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

There's a lot of em purport to be Princes and aren't:)
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

I dated the king of pain once upon a time. :)
You know him too I think. :)

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Lyn Anderson

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