kissing frogs in lieu of common sense

kissing frogs in lieu of common sense

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

I don't know where this one is going, it just sounded right

"

She's tired of ...

kissing frogs in lieu of common sense;
her lips are parched and dry,

each one holds his own consequence,
there's not enough balm to apply

maybe time to call it a day
and curl up with the cat,

there's safer ways a girl can play
men simply aren't all that
.



© 2016 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
an 8/6 rhyme scheme.

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I have definitely been there! You describe the feelings well, using relatable imagery. Nowadays, I like my frogs croaking & splashing in my front porch doggie water bowl! *wink! wink!*

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much for visiting these older pieces.:)
No, we certainly isn't. To be truthful, I'm just amazed we've been put up with for so long. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

thanks for dropping in to this one. Yes, well, I was in a mood at the time. Mostly I like men (for n.. read more
This is funny, made me larf!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

That, of course, was the intention.:)
Very funny and the song is simply sublimely ironic.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thanks for noticing that. I do appreciate all the reviews.
ok.. now I am giggling!... LOVE this one!!!.. the playful punch tickles in all the right places.. love the phrasing.. yep.. favorites.. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thanks, April, for all the reviews.
AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

it is always my pleasure.. you know I like to rack them up and enjoy the ride..
Agreed, at times contorting into your own is a way of re - connecting. In my case a therapeautic one as recharging is very much needed in order to continue the path.


Thankyou

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thank you, as always, Rene, for your ever thoughtful reviews.
Gotta love the soft kittens. So much less complicated than a difficult man. This one actually made me chuckle! Nice writing, KLG!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Glad to be of service.:)
Rather have the cats..those toads can create a big mess in your life

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Yeah I am digging my cat at the moment. Thanks for popping in.
The dating pool is certainly full of slimy things that can give you warts on your heart.

A great play on words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by as always.:)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

As always my pleasure :)
Sometimes, you think you're kissing a frog and then it turns out to be a toad.
Everyone knows toads can give you warts if you're not careful, so yeah....
Definitely be safe about the love and make sure you know exactly who you're kissing. :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

There's a lot of em purport to be Princes and aren't:)
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

I dated the king of pain once upon a time. :)
You know him too I think. :)

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Lyn Anderson

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