Sunday morning retrospectives

thoughts on a drizzly day

renegotiated with fate

the most
you ever talked
it felt so

unencumbered
natural, so
right ...

in your eyes
the recognition
this is something so

much more
than either of us
bargained for.

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all I keep thinking.

the light in your eyes
as you explain
and I listen.

all I keep thinking
is how cute you are
when you are chatty.

can a grown man be cute?

I didn't think so.
but then again,

I didn't think
a lot of things

until I met you.

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every time I think we may have hit a wall, we round the corner.

Author's Note

From the TRUE ROMANCE sound track

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love that last line..."every time i think we hit a wall, we round a corner"

and he is finally talkative...good thing...

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, yes, the story unfolds ... slowly, ever so slowly ...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Lovely relevations that express you falling, bit by bit. You seem breathless in these pieces and good you see him cute when he is chatty!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, and most definitely.

[realmwriter]

I've been there and done that. And according to my fiancé, yes a grown man can be cute. Argue and then move past it. Love it.

[Lyn Anderson]

Interesting the perspectives people have on this poem. No arguments here. Never have been. Just caution and trepidation. I like how people see these pieces from their own lives, thank you.

[realmwriter]

You are welcome

[Rene Salinas]

Unexpected but so hopeful. Of course at times we get down and in between each other we don't see a way forwards but then we are shown yet again I suppose that we are wrong. Then whatever it is that united becomes alive again.

Turning around the corner....

Thankyou

[Lyn Anderson]

Well, thank you. That is not to say this is an ode to a revived relationship, just an ongoing process of discovery.

[Rene Salinas]

Sounds good time let the discovery lead to kissie kissies....

[Lyn Anderson]

Never fear, that which is done is done, and can't be undone.

[Matching Socks]

Love the end, love it, such a perfect quote!
All I keep thinking: adorable, yes a grown man can be cute!!
For sure!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, I appreciate it.:)