ecstasycal admissions

whether you admit it or not ...

the good quiet

whether we admit it
or not
it's there --
the quiet
between us
when you
hold me
near.

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  i choose

i could have
anyone i
desire
    only
      you.

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  the in betweens
 
  between where we were
  and where we are today
  there are a million things
  left to say.

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in me.

I don't need furious
frenzied butterflies
and weak in the knees
I need the calm
you leave in me.

Author's Note

yes I realize ecstatycal is not a word:)

Reviews

[Bright Ocean Star]

I love this one. I love the last line, especially. But one question: Is Ecstasycal a word? I'm not even sure how to pronounce it. Great writing, my friend. Hope things work themselves out.

[Lyn Anderson]

No, it's my own ecstasycal creation.:)

[Lyn Anderson]

EX-TAZ-I-CAL is how I would pronounce it.

[Hitchhiker]

Wonderful take on a lover and a friend, and one who goes a long way to making you whole. Beautifully rendered, KL.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much, I appreciate it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Four simple verses that express clear emotk.ions and also make the reader thin

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for reading and reviewing.:)xo

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My fingers need to catch up with my thoughts !

[Rene Salinas]

The great seek of us to find unity through love and try we must. It doesn't matter if it is with another human being or a place or a town, you name it we create binds and as we nurture them we begin to love them. It sounds so simple yet is it? Judging by the great writing here not so. So many twist and turn so many different colours so many facets of emotions.

I need the calm you leave in me is a priceless line.

Thankyou

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, I liked that one too.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is undeniable, no matter how much we try to fool the heart once it falls.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for reading and reviewing:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are most welcome :))

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed one needs to settle in the end and muse endlessly, well done, great read! x

[Lyn Anderson]

I think I always was settling, but for the wrong things.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed we must right(write) that wrong!

[Lyn Anderson]

yes, thanks, and thanks for reading and reviewing.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

your welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like all these but mostly relate to the last one...at this point in my life..."i need the calm"----

so relatable what you write.

[Lyn Anderson]

yes, past all that chaotic stuff people think is love. Most definitely.

[ANM]

It is true sometimes words are not required.... Enjoyed this KL quirky and different!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you I appreciate it.

[ANM]

You are very welcome.