cram the genie back in

a song prompt from NoelHC

I want you open
like I want to open
up to you

but I am so scared
to push too hard
too fast

we did it all backwards
and somehow that's
been okay --

can't put the genie
back in the bottle

can't cram that damned
thing back in the package,

and I don't want to,
not really ...

I would just like to
know if you feel
the same way too.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

It is finnaly a great moment when to soul's find each other in there is that moment of unravelling.I can only imagine KL's passion as she discovers somone she admits into her life, only imagine I say becuase as she let's me know the Genie came out and it is ready to attest and bring magic to this relationship. But at KL's speed a moment of "Hold on a minute cowboy", is he at the same stage?

Hopefully the answer will be positive.

Thankyou

[Lyn Anderson]

It's like watching a turtle and a snail negotiate a race to watch grass grow. Both parties admit to interest, each is slow to move in any direction.:)

[MomzillaNC]

Honestly, when it's right… when it's all it should be… there are no doubts. I had those relationships too, that left you always doubting, wondering if you're loving enough or good enough. But, when it's right… love and relationships lift you up and hold you there, above the doubt, the pain, and the loneliness.

[Lyn Anderson]

I guess you are lucky. The one I had I thought was like that ended up being a lie. The doubt comes from within, and the relationship suffers for it ...

[MomzillaNC]

I am incredibly blessed. But, I also worked very hard to get to this place. I hope you get there too.

[AprilRN1210]

haha.. I hear ya girl.. be careful what you wish for, you just might get it.. then sometimes we don't know what the heck to do with it..

we all have some of those doubts... those questions... those feelings...

nicely done again.... you and Noel are on a roll:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, well, if I publish I will have to dedicate it to him.

[NoelHC]

We never can really know, and that FUD (fear, uncertainty and doubt) just will not get out of our heads. Well done.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for the inspiration, makes it easy to keep writing ...:)