When I am not there

a wondering prompted by a song suggestion from Noel HC

do you wonder
what I am doing
when you are not
around?

if you could see
me baking those
butter tarts
you so like to eat,
would you laugh and kiss
the flour off my nose?
grab my a*s as you
are walking by?
hop in the shower with me
just because you can?

if you are out dancing,
do you ever
want to reach
out for my hand?

or is all of that just my wishful thinking?

Author's Note

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

That comfortable playfulness and casual gratitude is the best part of relationship. I think it's what everyone wants. I promise: it exists; I speak from experience. When you do find it, you must cherish it with the same wonder you dream for it.

[AprilRN1210]

ok... this one has that hopeless romantic sighing with cute, playful, loving imagery... kissing the tip of my nose, writing little notes for me to see when I wake up, watching from door way as I sing into my hairbrush dancing around the room when I think he is busy... ahhhhh... if only... well done girl.. and dang it Noel!..lol

[Delmar Cooper]

Your poetry makes my bread rise.

[Lyn Anderson]

ha ha and you make me laugh, my friend, for many reasons.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

How did you know I was an a*s grabber and shower share?

i love that song and your poem compliments it fabulously.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. Noel sent me a bunch more. Rob Zombie is sitting around wondering if his biggest fan has been converted ...:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well his probably rolling over in his living dead grave, LOL

[Rene Salinas]

To wonder and think. And then to pose questions, they all seem to be immersed in wishful thinking. But on the other hand as the questions are been asked one can't help to think that it could also go negatively. Hence the wishful thinking becuase of the seeming reality were He might not be thinking on the same terms.

What it is to wonder.

Thankyou

[Lyn Anderson]

thank you very much for your review. NoelHC keeps sending me these music prompts.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Romantic musing that flows like strokes of thoughts and exposes deep adoration.

[Lyn Anderson]

thanks for the read and review. NoelHC keeps trying to convert my music. :)

[Bright Ocean Star]

Oh, I like this one! It's very playfully romantic. Awesome write, KLG. You are definitely getting your groove back! :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, it's still all Noel's fault. The music and all.

[Bright Ocean Star]

He's good for you. It is good to write to great music. It sends the creative juices flowing...:)

[Matching Socks]

Very relatable... :)
Perfectly paired with that song.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, Noel and his country. He is trying to brainwash me. David Draiman and Maria Brinks are sorely disappointed.:)

[Matching Socks]

Just don't tell your heart...
(Your achy breaky heart)

[Lyn Anderson]

oh my Gawd, that's not even music, it's a whole other genre.

[NoelHC]

And Billy Ray Cyrus begat Miley Cyrus, and an abomination fell over the earth.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah, well, sadly, the apple doesn't fall too far from the tree.

[Matching Socks]

Omg, are you kidding me? Huge fan of the Cyrus' !!

[NoelHC]

The Hannah Montana Miley, or the twerking V 2.0 Miley?

[Matching Socks]

I was only kidding dahling.

[NoelHC]

We never can truly know, can we. Well captured here in these seemingly simple words, layers of complexities, all of our own doing.
A good write.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, I am glad you sent me those songs to ponder on. Oh, my, the guys from Korn and Godsmack are wondering when I am coming back to the darkside.

[NoelHC]

Oooh, doll, you are NOW on the dark side. Country music FTW!

[Lyn Anderson]

Okay, I don't usually do this, but it just struck me, I feel like I chanelled willweb in this write. I wish he would come back and visit.