Superbeast

for Rene

bemused
by
poetry
betwixt
and
between
skeletal
elements
of
insanity.

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"Clever girl" --
and raptors rule the
earth when "lady fingers"
taste divine.

(quotes from Jurassic Park, (Michael Crichton) and Skeleton Crew - Survivor Type - Stephen King)

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First world problems don't begin to cover,
what one poet will do to get noticed by the other.

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loneliness.
I find it only happens
when I let it in.
So why can't I learn?

I am like the stupid
braless chick
in the tank top
in the poorly scripted
horror movie ...

Just don't open the
f*****g door!

Author's Note

I used this song before, but it fits so phooey.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Superwoman to save the day! YAY...love them all, we need new script writers to keep that flippin' door bolted. Love the first one, I know where you're headed with this, where's the kryptonite?

[Lyn Anderson]

Indeed. Where is it? This one I wrote for Rene. I was firing off poems and reviews rapid fire yesterday. I am a little slower on the uptake this morning.:)

[Einstein Noodle]

no bra and tank top .. you got my attention ;) i am taking this meditation with me:

"loneliness.
I find it only happens
when I let it in."

fantastic form you use .. love the quotes woven in .. not a zombie movie fan :( its a fantastic analogy for how stupid we can be ... with not only lonliness; but all kinds of other things that go bump ..
E.

[Lyn Anderson]

I used to watch horror movies. Kind of outgrew most of them. But every one has the same damned girl doing the same damned thing. Thanks for the review.

[Einstein Noodle]

yeh! i kinda like her ;) ... oh i'm a sad sack of a man! :)))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

lonliness only comes in if we let it...like the beginning of a horror movie...the first victim walks through the house with the lights off....just begging to be killed...yet we open that door, don't we?

are we just gluttons for punishment?

[Lyn Anderson]

Sometimes, Jacob, I think so. Thank your for reviewing.

[Lydia Shutter]

Why do we open the door even when we know there is danger or emotional pain on the other side? Are we all a little bit masochistic? Sometimes I think that is the case! Love the quotes that inspired this one. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much.

[Baby Ricochet]

What would you do for a first world Klondike bar?

[Lyn Anderson]

Me, personally, I don't like them.:)

[Matching Socks]

You always have the BIG finish! :)
Love it. Jurassic Park and Stephen King, cool mix.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, those are two of my favourite quotes.

[Matching Socks]

They're like a bundle of sick joy.

[NoelHC]

First world problems, indeed! Especially when the third world poets were plundered for that being noticed!
And yes, in horror flicks, do not open that door, nor answer that phone. The Scary Movie 1 through 537 covered those well!
Well done.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for indulging me, now the others...

[NoelHC]

I thought this was the one you pointed me to. I am a man, I need explicit instructions. Then we throw away the manual. XOXOXO

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes this one and meandering

[NoelHC]

I shall hie mineself there, post haste. Don't whip me mistress. (Not that there is anything wrong with that.)

[Rene Salinas]

Some peole seem to be blessed by a creative mind by imaginative thinking as if truly their doors were open and while that may cause some friction with those who need to fight hard to get in touch with that side it would be foolish to also not see that when you have that much sensitivity things hurt more, they sound louder, gestures seem more than just manners. Control and a lot of care then in order to balance out would seem needed. Never stupidity!

"But risks must be taken, because the greatest risk in life is to risk nothing.
The person who risks nothing, does nothing, has nothing, is nothing, and becomes nothing.
He may avoid suffering and sorrow, but he simply cannot learn, feel, change, grow or love.
Chained by his certitude, he is a slave; he has forfeited his freedom.
Only the person who risks is truly free."

Thankyou

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, my friend. I love that you get me. I feel honoured to know the honest and special people in this place. Just throw out the rotten ones, they can't spoil the good.