mind meandering.

another collection of thoughts.

okay:)

I wanted to write something

silly.

I wanted to write something ...

sexy,

profound,

meaningful,

romantic ...

but nothing sums you up better than this:

okay. :)

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unfit

jury most imprudent;

you say you are biased.

so am I,

where does that leave us?

unfit for jury duty

in the trial of love ...

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time travel

if I could turn back time,

I might have said yes.

and the answer to

the next question you asked,

might have been no.

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sealed with a curse

my love for you

is sealed inside a poem.

consider it a sarcophagus --

it can never be opened,

for fear of

unleashing your curse.

(poems two and four inspired by Jacob, for whose words and exemplary attitude I am grateful.)

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doesn't hurt a bit

the accident:

I tripped.

I fell.

I found out

that smashing face first

into pavement

doesn't hurt
as much as

loving you.

 

Author's Note

why this song? this is one of those deep but weird songs, a lump I needed to excise.

Reviews

[NoelHC]

If I Could Turn Back Time. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BsKbwR7WXN4 Released 1989! Wait! What?
That is the part that spoke to me in this one.
Well done, yet again.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for following instructions :)

[NoelHC]

Oh, I know how to follow instructions, mistress. ; )

[Rene Salinas]

Oh my that last one Impaled by the emotional content. Some experiences will need time the hate and ager might dissipate a little may not. In here clearly the feelings are fresh. It reminds me of one of those grphic desing moments that we were asked to create as a project multimedia thing.

Time goes by slower when you miss the one you love.

The format I find very attractive.

Thankyou

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, "bow" I am flattered you find my format attractive:)

[Rene Salinas]

Very it reminds me of something call sequential logic If this happen then this if not then , and, or. And so it goes... a little dry but hey someone has to like it.....

[Frieda P]

Ouchie that last one hurt....meandering in a confuzzeled head, sounds like mine, I can relate, and leaned a new word in the interim...sarcophagus, cool.

[Lyn Anderson]

I literally did do a face plant this week at work. Black, blue and scraped from head to toe.:)

[Frieda P]

Real life imitates poetry, or vice versa? :)

[AprilRN1210]

had my mind wandering with this one and made me wonder.... maybe just need more coffee.. lol
wheeew....


that curse DOES hurt.... answer WOULD be different second time..... and would take jury duty any damn day of the week instead... lol

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, yes, coffee should fix it right up.:)

[Baby Ricochet]

They're all good little poems. The second one I like best. I never get picked for Jury duty.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much, I appreciate it.

[Matching Socks]

Sealed with a curse: love it!!!!!!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, Jacob's words inspire me always, but especially tonight.

[Matching Socks]

Yeah, he's so cool. :)