This should be found when looked upon the term relationships in the dictionary. Soft but Hard , Near but Far and so simple yet complicated. For all those who can't cope with unresolved situations be warned and keep yourdistance as this may have unexpected side effects.
Amazing poetry and a outstanding song.
"a lover close,
but distant,
soft,
but hard."
The above lines. Written softly and carry a heavy thought to be shared. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I am delighted with your visit, and your choice of poems to review -- the romantic ones I feel most .. read moreI am delighted with your visit, and your choice of poems to review -- the romantic ones I feel most honoured that such a romantic poet can appreciate.:)
makes me chuckle ... a place to hard eh!? too hard to ascertain??? :) there sure can be a close distance when it comes to lovers ... what a unique and imaginative poem says i
E.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thanks for the review. While the conflict has passed, I remember these feelings well.
Ah, yes......complicated. Which one is truly the one for you? Stuck between in a dichotomy of soft and hard, sweet and sour. Wonderful write, KL. Lydi**
OMG(gosh), "it's complicated", the universe is still expanding, the earth spins on it's axis, it is raining in Manhattan, and KL has a dilemma; two loves. And of this the most difficult to solve or understand is what's a meowing KL to do??? What I think is that you Ms complicated, will figure it out and write us a wonderfully loverly romantic poem that tickles us with spice... amen and thank you very much. ;0)
~~redzone
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Ha ha very funny and thank you for the poem. No men were spliced in the making of this poem:)
10 Years Ago
Does that mean no decision has been made??? Why not clone both and keep both of them??? Problem so.. read moreDoes that mean no decision has been made??? Why not clone both and keep both of them??? Problem solved and KL is happy and clones don't mind sharing...;-o
Surprised you didn't go punkier with Avril's "Complicated" : )
The dilemma is presented well in this poem KL, well done!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5NPBIwQyPWE
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Nah, Avril's fun but I like placing that tune up against this dilemma. I am, after all, a child of t.. read moreNah, Avril's fun but I like placing that tune up against this dilemma. I am, after all, a child of the 70's.
And as you forgot I had read it! ain't getting old grand! I was not sure which one you were referrin.. read moreAnd as you forgot I had read it! ain't getting old grand! I was not sure which one you were referring to, actually, you are somewhat prolific. And prodigious.
10 Years Ago
770 pieces posted, about 20 removed when I was betrayed by my friend last year, so yeah, been busy i.. read more770 pieces posted, about 20 removed when I was betrayed by my friend last year, so yeah, been busy in 10 months ...
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