my thoughts are filled with you

a collection

thoughts On you --

 

you said you would ravish me,

oh how I want you to lavish me

with your imagination;

stroke my heart’s desire,

past and present melt in fire,

caress my need and sip my want,

whisper softly in my ear,

pull me close and feel me near,

I crave you here

inside all the places where

I hide.

 

The bus finally came. Twenty odd years, but not too late …

 

drought

divining for love

I was pretty sure

it would end in drought,

     when out of nowhere     

you made it rain.

 

                

 

between the lines.

 

flipping through codes
you stumbled across
a name,
and a face,
someone you've wanted
to see,
for a very long time
and just like that,
history
moved
into
today.

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[redzone]

Funny how "thoughts" can come at different times, and yet when fashioned together they become a single whole.... like a walk through a city park with different scenes, and yet it's one park.. your poem has different parts, and I like them all, but how many get to feel and see, "history move into today"... and yet many may want to. Seems with these and I'm sure many more thiughts, there will be many more poems. I look forward to reading each one

Love your poem KL

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much

[redflutterby]

Sounds like a mind preoccupied with love or at least longing, which of course don't always happen at the same time. Each piece may be different but they work well together in this collection. Glad I found the energy to review today...its good to "hear" my friends.

[Matching Socks]

This to me reads like it was written by a love optimist. :)
Sometimes, that bus, it's not really late. It's just waiting for the right time.
I like the feel to these ones. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Of course you do. You are a romantic :) thanks

[Rene Salinas]

I love this kind of thing. Is like a concept played to music. The music will add harmony and melody but as it is continuous it allows for changes through time. Jesus that bus! I would put a complain. The stage of the outporing is/was beautiful. Oh but the last bit is hearbreaking in more ways than one.

Gulp!

Thankyou

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much I appreciate it

[ron]

Good for you. Now that you have broken all our hearts -sighs-...
We are all very happy he came back into your life.

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww I am so not a heartbreaker. Thanks.

[ron]

If you say so...;)

[Frieda P]

Love this unique style of yours. The first is my favorite, hate it when that dang bus is late! :) Let it rain.....

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah the first is my favourite

[Anne Timmins]

wow! This is very deep and provocative. Another great write.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for your review

[KH]

Is there a hiding from this --

Evermore tsunami?

Fire the driver!

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah that driver really should be fired.

[KH]

K, kicked his a*s down the road :p

[KH]

I must say you are very talented KL. All of your prose so far deep, visceral, emotional and tangible. Just amazing.

[Delmar Cooper]

I liked all that ménage, but "Drought" the best. "Dvining" especially.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like all these short poetic bits you put together...a collage of impactful thoughts, tightly knitted together....and you lavish Me with your imagination, KL.
jacob

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. I am flattered and honnoured