I wish a wish.

inspired by "Goodnight my someone"

I wish a wish
I may tonight,
sway me maybe
by candlelight --
when I feel
its light
go dim,
I cannot help
but wonder
if I have
captured him
the way
he caught me
unaware --
a fish on a line ...

I try to imagine
a future
without him, me, a porch,
and a rocking chair.
and I come up empty,
every time.

Author's Note

I could not make this up. Captcha FISHLINE

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

oooooh, gentle, sweet swaying melody, the flow is so tender and moving... I love this one girl... I've always longed for a porch swing and someone to watch the sunsets with me snuggling.. old fashioned southern girl at heart... such a lovely write... one of my favorites of yours... oh yes!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, here's too gooey love ...

[AprilRN1210]

I know right! ha!! got me... dang you!!

[Baby Ricochet]

Love is a many splendid thing fer sure

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww thanks MWAH!

[KH]

What a lucky man. I wish for your wondering to be true.

[Lyn Anderson]

The tale is yet to be written.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is many things but most of all it is undeniable.. when it finds you it will capture you. Resistance is futile.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is true, thank you for your read and review.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always a pleasure my talented friend.