two feet on the pedals
A Chapter by
Lyn Anderson
just popped into my head. yeah, officially on the sap train today:)
one foot on the gas, and the other hovers over the brake, can't get my heart in gear, there's too much at stake. I struggle to reach the sweet spot to clutch ... do I race forward or hold back? if I risk it, will I spin off the track? I knew I should have kept the damned manual , but I threw it out, long ago.
© 2016 Lyn Anderson
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I don't know, but i'm thinking the manual is the ex. Who at some point in life was good for something.
Where you been hiding.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Ha. I like that thought. I have just been very busy.
And when you learn how to drive it you question where or how far to go.
Always so complicated. :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
And when you learn how to drive it you question where or how far to go.
Always so complicated. :)
8 Years Ago
Thank you darling!
Those are some awesome metaphors… You rev that engine too soon or too fast could cause the engine to need rebuilding and that is expensive on the heart's wallet.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Those are some awesome metaphors… You rev that engine too soon or too fast could cause the engine to need rebuilding and that is expensive on the heart's wallet.
10 Years Ago
You got that right.
Put the foot to the floor and let that engine roar..... Go go go great little poem!
Posted 10 Years Ago
Put the foot to the floor and let that engine roar..... Go go go great little poem!
10 Years Ago
Thanks muchly, I appreciate it.
10 Years Ago
Your welcome...
This write truly intrigues me. I really like the style and format in which you write. You most definitely leave me wanting to read more. Very nice work
Posted 10 Years Ago
This write truly intrigues me. I really like the style and format in which you write. You most definitely leave me wanting to read more. Very nice work
10 Years Ago
Why thank you Patrick, nice to meet you. Thanks for popping in again.
you had a manual? I totally love this one.
Posted 10 Years Ago
you had a manual? I totally love this one.
10 Years Ago
Yeah, it wasn't in my language and I lost it anyway.
Did you keep the motor running? Hallmark is on the phone for you, you won a Hot Rod model of an ice cream truck, ;) I meant sweet!
Posted 10 Years Ago
Did you keep the motor running? Hallmark is on the phone for you, you won a Hot Rod model of an ice cream truck, ;) I meant sweet!
10 Years Ago
I know, gag, isn't it awful? I am drowning in my own sap. HELP.!
10 Years Ago
Ha weren't you just calling me sappy dragon sister? haha
10 Years Ago
Yes, I was, and I am admitting to my own sap.
10 Years Ago
If you write another sapper I'm gonna start worrying about you...just saying.
Splendid metaphor, KL....but in romance, is there a manual? I don't think any rules apply, do they? I enjoyed this one. Lydi**
Posted 10 Years Ago
Splendid metaphor, KL....but in romance, is there a manual? I don't think any rules apply, do they? I enjoyed this one. Lydi**
10 Years Ago
Thanks so much. If there is a manual, it never worked for me.
I could go down the line of change of oil, or even words like pimping but I rather stay focused withing the parameters of decency. I think you are an experience driver and you need no manual. There are times when stepping back to reach some objectivity is needed mainly through time. So in this sort of terms.
Less bruising more crusing.
Thankyou
Posted 10 Years Ago
I could go down the line of change of oil, or even words like pimping but I rather stay focused withing the parameters of decency. I think you are an experience driver and you need no manual. There are times when stepping back to reach some objectivity is needed mainly through time. So in this sort of terms.
Less bruising more crusing.
Thankyou
10 Years Ago
Thanks a lot. I noticed a typo. I will try to fix from phone.
You have a way of taking ordinary thoughts and situtions and turning them into rellly enjoyable free verse! And I will never give up my manual!
Posted 10 Years Ago
You have a way of taking ordinary thoughts and situtions and turning them into rellly enjoyable free verse! And I will never give up my manual!
10 Years Ago
That's me, taking the ordinary and dressing it up. :)
10 Years Ago
Just say to the clouds, I love to f**k!
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