I suck at admission most of the time in oblivion I. I am not too bad at submission (smiles), transference, well if I only knew what am I suppose to be responsible for that would make it easier as for skirting , if I only knew what to skirt. Sighs!. The one line it is defined in the boring IT world as scroll typing and it's great for me as I donlt need to make sense that way as no sentences commited. I continue to enjoy this which is your journey.
And some people can just kiss your a*s..ha!! Ive said it before and i'll say it again, if people don't like a certain style or type of poem then don't read it. A one line format poem is pretty obvious from glancing at the screen so why not just move on to something more to their liking?? Probably because many people are a******s.... sigh
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Yes, to each his own. There's lots of stuff I don't read, or do, and decline to comment, out of resp.. read moreYes, to each his own. There's lots of stuff I don't read, or do, and decline to comment, out of respect for other people's styles and tastes. But common sense and just plain politeness don't always rule in an anonymous format. :)
10 Years Ago
True KL...ive seen some stuff on here which I find objectionable and I simply move along. But it usu.. read moreTrue KL...ive seen some stuff on here which I find objectionable and I simply move along. But it usually has to do with content never format.
Wow. KL, you have a way with penning these powerful and introspective pieces. You are absolutely right. Skirting the issue is easier than admitting we cause our own problems. Perfect piece! Love the structure as well! xo :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much. I once had a person say my poem was the worst poem they ever saw due to the one w.. read moreThank you so much. I once had a person say my poem was the worst poem they ever saw due to the one word format. That same person claimed they didn't comment on poems if they didn't like them. So much for constructive criticism. I understand opinion, but that is just pointless.:)
10 Years Ago
Well, I think the one word format works for this write. I can understand some might not work, but st.. read moreWell, I think the one word format works for this write. I can understand some might not work, but still, it is a matter of opinion and how the writer wants it to come across. I feel this is perfect! :)
not a big country fan, but this was a cute song... as far as the poem.. wow.. I have to say, this is powerful ma'am... we like to dance around the problems that define, accept, and deal with em... the evolution is told in the most profound way... those one words when done right are the most intense way to knock it out the park.. and that is what you did with this one.. I am in awe... absolutely brilliant...
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much. I am not a country "fan" either, as you can see from my normal music tastes. Howe.. read moreThank you so much. I am not a country "fan" either, as you can see from my normal music tastes. However, I am open minded enough to add some things into my repertoire. If you really like a person who introduces you to something, sometimes it pays to have an open mind. In this case, the shoe fit, so I put it on.
10 Years Ago
yea me too, but out of 100 songs, maybe 5 are country... lol
lets see you doe-see-doe around i.. read moreyea me too, but out of 100 songs, maybe 5 are country... lol
lets see you doe-see-doe around in those cowgirl boots ma'am... yeeeeehaaaaw!
10 Years Ago
Oh, my only cowboy boots are biker boots -- a compromise:)
haha!! agreed.. mind are thigh high-high heeled boots... black and leather.. whatever works.. :)
10 Years Ago
Yeah, thigh high doesn't work for everyone -- lucky gal, you. I would look like a dime store hooker .. read moreYeah, thigh high doesn't work for everyone -- lucky gal, you. I would look like a dime store hooker in those.:)
10 Years Ago
agreed... I have seen some girls wearing things they know they have no business wearing... but other.. read moreagreed... I have seen some girls wearing things they know they have no business wearing... but others are able to pull it off.. different flavors is what makes the world go 'round... and those days I do wear them are few and far between.. special mood required.. :)
Thanks KL, I appreciate that you have come to appreciate some of the heartfelt lyrics in country music as I do. As the song opens:
I don't wanna rush this thing
I don't wanna jump the gun
I really wanna say those three little words
But I'm gonna bite my tongue
Always the doubt, always the uncertainty, easier to skirt the issue.
Hmmmm, one line format, I liked it. Freida challenged me over a 10 word poem a few days ago, I have done nought so far. Maybe a 10 line piece of drivel is in my future.
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