skirting the issue

skirting the issue

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

some people don't like the one line format. I do.

"
admission
submission
transition --
transference
of
responsibility;
skirting
the
issue
is
easier
done
than
said.


© 2016 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
For Noel, who sent me this song.

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I think it comes to acceptance. Nice write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

10 Years Ago

As a side note, what is this format you talk about?
Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

One word per line. It annoys some people, as I found in the past.
Jon Roggie

10 Years Ago

I go with my constant comment, "Just write."
So true … make a sound and they hear you. Some great rhythm set up with this piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thanks Pryde, I appreciate the view and the review.
I suck at admission most of the time in oblivion I. I am not too bad at submission (smiles), transference, well if I only knew what am I suppose to be responsible for that would make it easier as for skirting , if I only knew what to skirt. Sighs!. The one line it is defined in the boring IT world as scroll typing and it's great for me as I donlt need to make sense that way as no sentences commited. I continue to enjoy this which is your journey.

Thrills and Pills hopefully no bellyaches.

Thankyou

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the ever thoughtful reviews.
Avoiding your feelings is far easier than expressing them for sure.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

That is for sure.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

:))))))))))
Amazing use of words. I had to read again. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Well, I am pleased that you felt prompted to.:)
And some people can just kiss your a*s..ha!! Ive said it before and i'll say it again, if people don't like a certain style or type of poem then don't read it. A one line format poem is pretty obvious from glancing at the screen so why not just move on to something more to their liking?? Probably because many people are a******s.... sigh

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Yes, to each his own. There's lots of stuff I don't read, or do, and decline to comment, out of resp.. read more
redflutterby

10 Years Ago

True KL...ive seen some stuff on here which I find objectionable and I simply move along. But it usu.. read more
Wow. KL, you have a way with penning these powerful and introspective pieces. You are absolutely right. Skirting the issue is easier than admitting we cause our own problems. Perfect piece! Love the structure as well! xo :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I once had a person say my poem was the worst poem they ever saw due to the one w.. read more
Madalyn Beck

10 Years Ago

Well, I think the one word format works for this write. I can understand some might not work, but st.. read more
not a big country fan, but this was a cute song... as far as the poem.. wow.. I have to say, this is powerful ma'am... we like to dance around the problems that define, accept, and deal with em... the evolution is told in the most profound way... those one words when done right are the most intense way to knock it out the park.. and that is what you did with this one.. I am in awe... absolutely brilliant...

Posted 10 Years Ago


AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

haha!! agreed.. mind are thigh high-high heeled boots... black and leather.. whatever works.. :)
Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Yeah, thigh high doesn't work for everyone -- lucky gal, you. I would look like a dime store hooker .. read more
AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

agreed... I have seen some girls wearing things they know they have no business wearing... but other.. read more
Thanks KL, I appreciate that you have come to appreciate some of the heartfelt lyrics in country music as I do. As the song opens:

I don't wanna rush this thing
I don't wanna jump the gun
I really wanna say those three little words
But I'm gonna bite my tongue

Always the doubt, always the uncertainty, easier to skirt the issue.

Hmmmm, one line format, I liked it. Freida challenged me over a 10 word poem a few days ago, I have done nought so far. Maybe a 10 line piece of drivel is in my future.

Well done, I liked the poem, and the format.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Noel for your input.
A sage piece that dribbles like melting ice cream down the page.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

I think I like Sage

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