when you come undone

I love this song.

you are the first person I want to hear from
when I am in a mess.
the first person I want to tell
when I am at my best.

but am I that, for you?

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Simple and powerful words. We need someone to hold us up and we hope we can return the favor. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much for your extended visit.

[Coyote Poetry]

My pleasure. I will catch up. 960 read request.

[Frieda P]

The million dollar question.... I love this song too.

[Lyn Anderson]

yes, it is a biggie, for sure.

[misha]

I loved this. It was so amazing in its simplicity yet it held a very complicated question. You did a wonderful job!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Hmmmm, yes that is a question we all can ask when someone becomes our world.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, I know, and it is what is sometimes the thing we most want to know but are afraid to hear the answer.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes you are so correct my friend, sometimes ignorance is bliss.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Straightforward awesomeness.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much for your visit.

[Lydia Shutter]

Aha, that is the question. A person like that is all important in your life, but if she or he does not feel the same way, well, it does not last long. No one wants to listen to news....good or bad....all the time and never share back. Short, yet saying so much. I liked it. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks a lot, I appreciate it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

good question...are the feelings reciprocal?

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes. This song is one of my faves

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A lovely sentimental love poem which asks the imortal question.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yep that's me, all mushy and sentimental

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks Ron, I appreciate it. I am due for a trip to your page. I haven't been at my best these days, functioning at half capacity.

[ron]

You are most welcome KL. Take your time it will be there waiting.

[ron]

This is beautiful. I hope you are that for someone.