The biggest moon

On this day,
steeped in blue,
there is a moon
in a painted sky,
singing a song
for not one lost
butterfly
but two ...

Author's Note

For K and L. Somehow we found each other through you.
The song is just because it reminds me of her.

Reviews

[realmwriter]

And maybe, just maybe, you did after all. Just maybe.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, I really did love this piece when I put it down.

[realmwriter]

I know you did.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

There is always a saving grace in every heartache, we just need to wait for the glow in those midnight emotions.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, sorry I missed this review.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh no worries hon, easy to do when you are so popular :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Great music and beautiful description of the moon. A lot of people enjoyed the amazing view of the moon. Thank you for sharing the amazing song and words.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much. I appreciate it.

[Frieda P]

I do believe that huge brilliant moon was a sign....and there was a meteor shower too supposedly...so apropos.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, my kids saw the bright sky, and we got up to watch a stray meteor or two.

[Frieda P]

I didn't catch any meteors, but was in awe of the supermoon.

[Blake Fodor]

a hauntingly beautiful poem with deep emotional impact...a great poem!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for the review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I too, feel them.....strongly....not one heart but two....and that is what happens in a relationship....painful breakups hurt both sides....severs wings...we can no longer fly.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. This is for two special butterflies who were lost on the same day. It is by some weird coincidence I found Frieda, that's all I can say.

[Matching Socks]

I don't know the story here but I feel your words,

[Lyn Anderson]

This has to do with the poem Today I and Sometimes I take the dark - for now I leave these things.

[Mary Bosworth]

profound and wonderfully written! i really like this a lot!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for the review.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very poignant write with a very evocative tune!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, so much. The colours are not something I do. But I felt it necessary, for sentimental reasons.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Understood x