Summer's death
A Chapter by
Lyn Anderson
No, this is not about fall.
Summer's sweet breath used to comfort me, kept me warm and safe from harm; It still fools me, when it enters, and offers up the sun -- Somehow, I know something bad is yet to come. So many losses, so many loves -- lost memories stranded on highways, under tracks; tangled in the roots of trees -- I am swallowed by Summer's death.
© 2016 Lyn Anderson
Author's Note
Summer is a mixed blessing for me. Too many anniversaries of too many deaths.
The pop song sounds happy, but it's not.
Reviews
I can understand this. For some summer isn't as happy as it should be. I wish it was for you.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thanks so much. I know I am not the only one. It is the season of accident and tragedy.
Forgot to rate so I had to review again lol.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Forgot to rate so I had to review again lol.
Beautiful imagery. I really like this poem and it flows so well. It is very sad but it is not just sad it so honest that there is almost something nostalgic about...like I have felt this, lived it. It i very relate able. Great write.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Beautiful imagery. I really like this poem and it flows so well. It is very sad but it is not just sad it so honest that there is almost something nostalgic about...like I have felt this, lived it. It i very relate able. Great write.
10 Years Ago
Thanks so much for your kind words.
This 'M' has a taste of darkness and regret in its melancholly voice. A gulf away from your usual offerings! But it is tight and crisp and flows well to paint that picture.
Posted 10 Years Ago
This 'M' has a taste of darkness and regret in its melancholly voice. A gulf away from your usual offerings! But it is tight and crisp and flows well to paint that picture.
10 Years Ago
yes, well, certain dates sneak up on me.
10 Years Ago
F**k aniversaries I say! Banish them to the basement of hell and take back the summer!
10 Years Ago
Yeah, I know. I try to forget. I really do.
10 Years Ago
Just get the sun on your skin!
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Added on August 9, 2014
Last Updated on September 30, 2016
Tags:
death ,
memories ,
heartbreak ,
summer ,
hurt ,
suicide ,
pain ,
accidents ,
mourning ,
loss
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Lyn Anderson Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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