clever boy

figured out something no one else did

Clever boy,
you figured out
you could do more
than melt ice cubes
by strategic placement
even hearts will defrost
with the right setting,
and the correct operator.

Author's Note

captcha foretalk

Reviews

[Papaya]

A very heart warming poem K. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. I needed quite the defrosting after all those years.

[Papaya]

And look at you now... :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Just a puddle.:)

[Anne Timmins]

What a clear and concise picture your draw here. Your words, though few, convey a mountain of images in the mind.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for the very thorough review.

[Ashira Macy]

Spicy little bit of poetry you have here, but not obscene, nice and tasteful and the perfect amount of innuendo. Very lovely work.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much, I appreciate that.

[Frieda P]

Did we have a good night? ;)

[Lyn Anderson]

Melted a few ice cubes, slept like a baby:)

[Frieda P]

Just keep rubbing it in, you ARE relentless woman. ;) MWAH!

[ron]

Cute poem KL. That can happen sometimes.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, Ron, I appreciate the review.

[ron]

Your most welcome KL.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok so he put them in your gin and tonic!?

Lovely little ditty!

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, sure, although I am a Rum and Coke girl -- I am sure you will have something to say about that.

[Trace]

Reminds me of that song: smooth operator by M. J.

dont think this needs a mature banner though.
Pretty mild images as to melting ones heart.

Enjoyed.Trace

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Prefer Sade's rendition of 'Smooth Operator'.

[Lyn Anderson]

Me too. LOL

[Lyn Anderson]

Wasn't sure about the mature banner. I guess it passes.

[kublakhan27]

I love this metaphor...your wit borders on morose sometimes, which is my favourite kind of wit.

[Lyn Anderson]

Mine too. Must be a Canadian thing.:)

[kublakhan27]

Haha Yeah everyone who thinks we're so polite needs to read more of our poetry :P

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The key to a woman's heart is showing you that you love her, not just telling her.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much, I appreciate it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Twas my pleasure :)))