collective thoughts

another page of random connect the dots

the dog told me all I need to know about you

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loose gravel
raked thru
the fish bowl
of my life
sometimes,
you gotta just
let it go,
or sweep it away.

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Milk weed
and honey
sweet smell
of hay in the
breaking dawn,

thoughts of you
percolating coffee,
wet like morning dew,
enter me softly
tickle my nose,

imagine you to
the ends of my toes,
fill my cup,
drink you up,
                               where it stops,
                               nobody knows.
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I ate you
for breakfast
and slurped up
the last of you
with the crust
leftover from
the one before,
licking the plate
clean,
I had to admit
I wanted
more.
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if I had to do it all over again, I would. and I would b***h about it again too.

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I ran up the hill,
I caught my breath.
the hitch in my side,
was just a signal,
to crank up the music,
and run some more.
       if there is an obstacle
       in my way,
       I go through, not around.
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Apologies are not necessary at this juncture. You can't undo what's been undone.

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Author's Note

Another collection on one page.

Reviews

[ron]

Interesting random thoughts.
Would love to slip into your thoughts and play around for a while.

[Lyn Anderson]

Now that is an interesting thought. I think it deserves a poem.

[ron]

Lol, I cant wait to read it.

[Jessica Lynn Polley]

Wow this poem is very dynamic there is so much going on I enjoyed getting lost in it. This poem almost feels bipolar but I love that about it most how the moods change from endearing to consuming and back again. This is the kind of poem a reader can feel because you put so much emotion into it. Great Write!

[Lyn Anderson]

Why thanks, I appreciate that. I have several of these. It is how I always used to write poetry, collecting them on napkins and scraps of paper and reassembling them at the end of the day. I started posting this type on here a while back, and some people like them. For me, it is like returning to my roots. I appreciate the review.:)

[Delmar Cooper]

All parts are enjoyable. I enjoyed the last most and the first mostly and the middle was cream filled the way I like it. The aphorism was the cherry.

[Lyn Anderson]

Delmar, you are my hero. Your reviews never cease to make me smile.:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love these...and for the second one was thinking...maybe get a catfish to clean the bottom of the tank...
let the scavengers pick up the broken pieces of us.

you are so creative...really would be fun sharing breakfast with you...i don't mind the crust either.

:)

jacob

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww, thanks. Jacob, I don't know if you ever collaborate, but I would be honoured if that were something you might consider.

[John Anderson]

interesting jumble of thoughts.......

[Lyn Anderson]

thanks for stopping in.