unwelcome senryu

ok I admit it, I can't be all quippy and sunshiny light all the time

No is not enough,
Your requests fall on deaf ears,
Unwelcome inbox

Author's Note

yeah, what of it?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

There is great wisdom in these words. The word "No" can be the beginning to the end. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, thanks so much.

[Baby Ricochet]

You tell em sister. ,,,,,

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww, Baby, you never fail to make me smile when you pop in.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Fiesty and abrasive and very direct!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much. Some days I get in a snit.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

we all have our moments even I do.

and I am a bubbly friendly happy soul
but we all get annoyed and we hurt and feel
pain it is normal to feel that way.


It feels better to get it off
your chest.


I enjoyed this I love SENRYU's
thank you for sharing.


Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for the lovely review.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're quite welcome. was a pleasure to read. blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

[Lyn Anderson]

I was questioned on this not being a valid senryu. I have consulted a person I consider to be an expert who assures me this is a senryu. And so, I guess it is, in so far as I understand the form.

[Rita L. Sev]

A a usually sunshiny comrade, I get exactly where this is coming from. A poetic sledgehammer is sometimes what is needed.

[Lyn Anderson]

yes, sometimes, sometimes. Thanks.

[Frieda P]

It's called BLOCK.....RAWR!! Had enough eh? :)

[Lyn Anderson]

ha ha, yes, eu entendo.

[Matching Socks]

Feisty feline strikes again. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah well some people pick the wrong cat door

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hmm you're normally sunshiny I did not know that lol.I hear you cat .

[Lyn Anderson]

Happy as a little lark lol