Mouse on the Menu

on another challenge quest from Noel HC this time

the mouse
was KING
of all he surveyed
quick and clever
he bamboozled
the population
with words
like libation
with never
a thought
for the poor
bedraggled masses.
He only wanted
his cheese
he was sure
like Marie
the rest could
have cake
he only knew
how to take take take

till one day, quite
unexpectedly,
kitty had an epiphany
and remembered
she wasn't a
vegetarian.

Author's Note

Captcha KARMIC

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And in there lies the moral of the story; don't eat cheese! Nice little flowing ditty.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Hey this sounds like most every politician out there… now where can we get a cat the size of Godzilla.

[Lyn Anderson]

Good idea. I like it

[Madalyn Beck]

Haha! This is splendid! Kitty is no vegetarian! I love that ending and the captcha! :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww thanks Maddy. I do appreciate your visit. P.S. Got a blackberry so kind of limited to email now. No one does BBM

[Madalyn Beck]

Awe! No worries. We'll keep in touch for sure! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol......you are so funny cat and I'm glad you realized you weren't a vegetarian :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah, it took me a while ...

[Vidya Bacchus]

But at least you remembered who you were yes :)

[J. K. Beach]

Ouch............................................................................................................................................................................................!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks I think, or did you stub your toe on the desk?

[Pryde Foltz]

till one day, quite
unexpectedly,
kitty had an epiphany
and remembered
she wasn't a
vegetarian.

A black nursery rhyme, indeed. Another really clever and creative piece.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks a lot. I was in a silly mood, and my generous friends were kind enough to provide me with challenges.

[jane7z]

Like the bite at the end. Your work always speaks for itself, very clever wit

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for the extended visit

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮I love the "let them eat cake" reference, haha. I really enjoyed this.╰☆╮

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks a lot for stopping in again. This was NoelHC's challenge.

[Matching Socks]

I once let a rat play with my cat
but the rat forgot his hat
and so now I'm a ...

Mom.

Oh... forget it.
Your poem is better.

[Lyn Anderson]

You are funny. I think all these challenges were fun.

[Matching Socks]

you're pretty good at rising up. : )

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww shucks, it is the stubborn in me. Mostly I never say can't, except when it comes to marriage, I am 0 for 2 on that one.

[Matching Socks]

Lol!! Aww, well. Takes a few tries sometimes. :-)

[willweb]

Oh Rats!!!! Catnip will do that. Fun read today KLGoode. There is no such thing as a better mousetrap when you have a hungry cat.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, I was issued the challenge by NoelHC using the pic. I find it fun, these little challenges...